题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was really sad while I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked very cool that I could hardly wait to ride ft. The shopkeeper told us that it was the latest style. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, so it was much better than the old one.
【答案】1. while-when
2. decided 后如 to
3. locating-located
4. The black bicycle-A black bicycle
5.very cool-so cool
6. charge me for 去掉for
7. that-which
8.choose-chose
9. him-me
10. so-but
【解析】第一处: 考察关系副词 引导时间状语从句,故while改为when.
第二处: 考察介词短语 decide to do 故在decide后加to.
第三处:考察过去分词表被动located in ....坐落于 故改为located.
第四处: 考察冠词 不是特指,故将the改为a.
第五处: 考察连词 so....that... 如此……以至于 故改为so.
第六处: 考察动词 charge ...for..索取 句意是找800元钱。故去掉for.
第七处: 考察关系代词 which引导的句子可加逗号,that不可以.故改为which.
第八处: 考察词性choose是名词 chose为动词 句意:我选择了另一个。故改为chose.
第九处:考察理解 前后主语不一致,逻辑错误。根据i chose another one .故将him改为me.
第十处: 考察关联词 句意:他不是很完美,但比旧的好得多。为转折语气,故填but.