Question

15．请根据下列提示要点，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇短文．
提示：
1．人人都想保持健康．
2．饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素和维生素；少吃黄油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖．
3．有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等．
要求：
1．短文须包括上述所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯．
2．词数约100左右．
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．
First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．
Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．
In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息请根据下列提示要点，以"The Ways to Keep Healthy"为题，写一篇短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：人人都想保持健康．饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素和维生素；少吃黄油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖．有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度劳累，不抽烟等等   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：keep healthy保持健康；  First首先；Second其次；put on weight 增肥；build up your body强身健体；Besides另外；In a word总之，一句话；
Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）
Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）
 In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）

解答 The Ways to Keep Healthy
       Everyone hopes to be in good health．But how？Here are some ways to keep healthy．
       First，you need a healthy diet．It is better to eat fresh fruit and vegetables because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins．Don't eat the food which contains too much sugar and fat，like butter，cheese，coffee and chocolate．（高分句型一）Fat and sugar make people put on weight easily．
      Second，good living habits are very important．You should do regular exercise to build up your body．Besides，enough rest is necessary for your health．（高分句型二）You need 8 hours'sleep a night and don't work too hard．Smoking is a bad habit，so never smoke．
       In a word，healthy food and good living habits are good ways to keep healthy．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．