题目内容
20.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
There are bound to be question marks over our future,so we often think of future.We often wonder that the world will like a hundred years'time.
Think of space.Perhaps a permanent station on the moon will have been set up.Perhaps people will be able to visit the moon as tourist.Cheap rockets for space travel will have been developed,permitted long journeys through the solar system.When that time come,people will be taking holidays in space and visiting another planets.Great progress will have been made in medicine,too.
Pollution have been controlled in a hundred years'time.
All the world will have been developed-even Antarctica.We will have used up many of the earth's land to build our cities,therefore floating the cities will have been built.The Japanese have already plans in this kind.And there will be cities under the sea.
分析 本文主要介绍未来的世界会是什么样子.在旅游方面,人们可能会乘坐火箭到太空和其它星球去度假,医药制造也会取得进步,污染会得到控制,漂浮的城市也将会被修建等.
解答 There are bound to be question marks over our future,so we often think of future.We often wonder that the world will like a hundred years'time.
Think of space.Perhaps a permanent station on the moon will have been set up.Perhaps people will be able to visit the moon as tourist.Cheap rockets for space travel will have been developed,permitted long journeys through the solar system.When that time come,people will be taking holidays in space and visiting another planets.Great progress will have been made in medicine,too.
Pollution∧have been controlled in a hundred years'time.
All the world will have been developed-even Antarctica.We will have used up many of the earth's land to build our cities,therefore floating the cities will have been built.The Japanese have already plans in this kind.And there will be cities under the sea.
详解:
1.over改为about/on 考查介词.根据句意:注定对我们的未来有一些问号.用介词about/on.
2.that改为what 考查固定句型.What be sb./sth.like?意为"…怎么样?",是固定句型.
3.tourist改为tourists 考查名词复数.根据上下文语境,"旅游者"不上一人,要用复数形式.
4.permitted改为permitting 考查现在分词.rockets与permit之间是主谓关系,用现在分词作状语.
5.come改为comes 考查动词时态.在条件状语从句中,主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时,因主语that time是单数形式,谓语动词也应用单数形式.
6.another改为other 考查形容词.此处指地球以外的星球,即:其它的星球,用other修饰.
7.加will 考查动词时态和语态.因全文讲述的是将来的事情,要用将来完成时的被动语态.
8.many改为most 考查代词.land是不可数名词,不可用many修饰,根据句意:我们会用法地球上大部分土地.用代词most.
9.去掉the 考查冠词.cities用现在分词floating作定语,the是多余的,要去掉.
10.in改为of 考查介词.of this kind意为"这类",是固定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | what the city of future will look like | |
B. | what will the city of future look like | |
C. | the city of future will look like what | |
D. | what look will the city of future like |
1.活动简介;2.支持理由;3.支持者理由;4.你的观点.
支持者理由 | 联系父母方便;上网便捷,有意学习 |
反对者理由 | 影响学习;手机游戏消磨意志 |
2.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
Smart phones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students.Smart phones are becoming more and more of a necessity for high school students.Therefore,today in our English class a discussion was held about whether we senior school students should use our smart phones at school.Opinions are different.
Students who are in favor of it consider it convenient to contact their parents when necessary.Besides,they point out it is smart phones that give them access to the Internet and thus benefit their study.While others hold the opposite opinion.They find it easy for some students to be addicted to playing the smart phones,which has a negative effect on their studies.Worse still it can also discourage students'will.
Personally,as long as you can control yourself and use it properly,you can take it..