题目内容
3.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
One day,my sister Emily was driven me home after school.I was a bit boring in the car and glanced at the side of the road.Suddenly,I saw a tiny kitten walking dangerous close to traffic.I tell Emily what I saw but she turned around immediately.We picked her and found that she was really sick.We took her home and tried to feed her.Then her dad found an animal hospital which was the hour's drive away.We drove all the way there and got her medicine and kitten food.It's been over a month now and the cat has been fully recovered.She's now the most energetic cats that I've ever known.
分析 本文主要讲述作者放学后由妹妹开车回家时,看到一只猫正危险地走向交通.她们捡起她,发现她病了,把她带回了家.在她的照料下,一个多月后恢复了.现在她是作者看到过的最有活力的猫.
解答 One day,my sister Emily was driven me home after school.I was a bit boring in the car and glanced at the side of the road.Suddenly,I saw a tiny kitten walking dangerous close to∧traffic.I tell Emily what I saw but she turned around immediately.We picked her∧and found that she was really sick.We took her home and tried to feed her.Then her dad found an animal hospital which was the hour's∧drive away.We drove all the way there and got her medicine and kitten food.It's been over a month now and the cat has been fully recovered.She's now the most energetic cats that I've ever known.
详解:
1.driven改为driving 考查动词时态.根据句意:一天,我妹妹Emily放学后正开车送我回家.要用过去进行时态.
2.boring改为bored 考查过去分词.过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
3.and改为so 考查连词.前后两个分句之间,后一句表示结果,用连词so.
4.dangerous改为dangerously 考查副词.walk是动词,要用副词修饰.
5.加the 考查冠词. traffic加the表示特指.
6.tell改为told 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
7.加up 考查固定搭配.pick up意为"拾起,捡起",是固定搭配.
8.her改为our 考查代词.根据句意:我们的爸爸找到了一家动物医院.用代词our.
9.加to 考查动词不定式.此处动词不定式作后置定语.
10.cats改为cat 考查名词.此处只有一只猫,要用单数形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.