题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护
2.展览时间:
3.投稿邮箱:intphotoshow@gmschool.com
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hu
【解析】试题分析:本文属于应用文写作。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信,建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点;注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意文章的字数控制
【亮点说明】
本文格式正确,结构合理,语句精炼,同时使用高级句子。Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. who引导定语从句;I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection.句中使用宾语从句;I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.宾语从句中包含the last time引导的时间状语从句;If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.条件状语从句使用巧妙。