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【题目】假定你叫李华,笔友Tom要来南昌旅游,发邮件过来想了解南昌的情况,请你回复他的邮件。要点如下:

1.来南昌旅行的最佳时间;

2.南昌最值得参观的一些地方;

3.来南昌之前需要做其它什么准备。

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

滕王阁:Tengwang pavilion 八一起义纪念馆Bayi uprising Memorial 革命的revolutionary

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【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to know you are going to visit Nanchang. I’m writing to inform you of something about Nanchang.

As far as I’m concerned, the best time to come to Nanchang is during the autumn, as the weather in this season is neither too hot nor too cold. As for the places to visit, I strongly advise you to go to Tengwang Pavilion, famous since the Tang Dynasty, from where you can overlook Ganjiang River. Besides, Bayi Uprising Memorial is another good choice, helping you have a good command of revolutionary history. Before coming, you’d better study a map of Nanchang to make your travel easier.

I do hope you will have a nice trip.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向Tom介绍南昌的情况,帮助他了解旅游相关对信息。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

人称:第一、三人称为主

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主

结构:总分总法

要点:

1.来南昌旅行的最佳时间;

2.南昌最值得参观的一些地方;

3.来南昌之前需要做其它什么准备。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

NanchangTengwang pavilionBayi uprising Memorialrevolutionaryinform sb. of sth.as far as I’m concernedneither … nor…as foroverlookGanjiang Riverhave a good command ofyou’d better do

第三步:连词成句

1. I’m glad to know you are going to visit Nanchang.

2. I’m writing to inform you of something about Nanchang.

3. As far as I’m concerned, the best time to come to Nanchang is during the autumn, as the weather in this season is neither too hot nor too cold.

4. As for the places to visit, I strongly advise you to go to Tengwang Pavilion, famous since the Tang Dynasty, from where you can overlook Ganjiang River.

5. Bayi Uprising Memorial is another good choice, helping you have a good command of revolutionary history.

6. Before coming, you’d better study a map of Nanchang to make your travel easier.

7. I do hope you will have a nice trip.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表因果关系:as

2.表并列补充关系:andbesidesas forneither … nor…

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

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