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近年来，汽车产业的飞速发展，汽车购买量猛增已给我们的生活和环境造成了极大的影响甚至困扰。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，题目自拟。

1. 描述目前的交通状况；

2. 人们大量使用汽车所产生的问题；

3. 你的建议或解决办法（至少两条）。

要求：

1. 文章要包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯；

2. 词数：120词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version

How to Solve Traffic Jam

In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.

It looks good but parking and driving have become a terrible problem. What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog. How to solve this problem remains puzzling. My suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, if possible, we can widen streets by changing two-lane streets into four-lane ones and four-lane ones into six-lane ones. Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. Finally, the citizens should be encouraged to get to or from work or go shopping by bus. If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

【解析】

试题分析：近年来，汽车产业的飞速发展，汽车购买量猛增已给我们的生活和环境造成了极大的影响甚至困扰。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，题目自拟。1.描述目前的交通状况；2.人们大量使用汽车所产生的问题；你的建议或解决办法（至少两条）。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】What’s worse it has caused lots of pollution and even contributed to smog.运用定语从句；Secondly, build more underground parking areas, which can reduce the number of cars on the street. 运用定语从句；Thirdly, some traffic vehicles, such as motors and trucks should be forbidden to enter the center of the city. 运用被动语态；If we only follow these suggestions, we can lighten the traffic pressure and avoid traffic jam.

运用if引导的条件句；In the past years, with the rapid development of car industry, more and more cars have been produced. Many citizens are willing to buy their own cars to enjoy a better life.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。