题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华,刚刚考上北京大学并已开学就读,请你用英语给远在美国进修的父亲写一封信,汇报自己的高考和在北大的情况。
1.考上了自己渴望已久的北京大学。
2.校园美丽,设备良好,有一座很大的图书馆。
3.教师出色,慈祥耐心。同学优秀,互相帮助。
4.自己对这里的一切非常满意,决心更加刻苦学习。
5.请爸爸不要为自己担心,自己已经长大了,会处理各种事情,并祝父亲身体好。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不纳入词数。
Dear Dad,
I am very excited to tell you that I have passed the entrance examination and been admitted into Peking University. ______________________________________________
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With best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Dad,
I am very excited to tell you that I have passed the entrance examination and been admitted into Peking University.
The university is beautiful and has advanced equipment. There is a large library in it. The teachers here are very good. They are very kind and patient to the students. The students here are excellent. They are very good at study and help each other. I am satisfied with all these and determined to study harder. Don't worry about me. I have grown up and can deal with all kinds of matters myself. I hope you will take good care of yourself in the US.
With best wishes.
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出,写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】I am very excited to tell you that I have passed the entrance examination and been admitted into Peking University.运用宾语从句; There is a large library in it. 运用固定句式;They are very good at study and help each other. 运用固定句式和固定词组相结合;Don't worry about me.运用祈使句; I have grown up and can deal with all kinds of matters myself. 运用and引导的并列句;I have grown up and can deal with all kinds of matters myself. 此句式为文章增色,显得文章很有档次。