Question

【题目】书面表达

你的堂兄Jayson 刚刚结束2016年高考（the College Entrance Examination），开始了为期两个多月的假期，请你按要求给他写封e-mail ,为他的假期提出良好建议，让他的假期更有意义。词数100左右。为使文章连贯可以增添细节，开头已给出。

要点： 1. 学习一技之长（游泳，驾驶…） 2. 出去旅游

3. 陪伴父母 4. 自己给出其他建议

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jayson,

I am glad that you have finished the College Entrance Examination. Congrtulations to you. As for you holiday, here are some tips for you .

First and foremost, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by the exam. Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, driving,cooking and so on. All these skills will benefit you a lot in your life. Third, you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents . Therefore, this is a good chance to keep them compay before you go to college. Last but not least, why not visit your former teachers, who gave you much help.

All above is my advice. I expect you will have a happy and meaningful holiday.

Yours

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：你的堂兄Jayson 刚刚结束2016年高考（the College Entrance Examination），开始了为期两个多月的假期，请你按要求给他写封e-mail ,为他的假期提出良好建议，让他的假期更有意义。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】 First and foremost, it is a good idea to have a nice trip, which will help you to relax completely from the long period of pressure caused by the exam. 与Last but not least, why not visit your former teachers, who gave you much help. 运用定语从句；I am glad that you have finished the College Entrance Examination. 运用固定句式；Second, you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to learn some skills, such as swimming, driving,cooking and so on. 此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。