题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华,你的加拿大笔友James想了解一下你要参加的2012年全国中学生英语夏令营的有关情况,请根据以下信息给他写一封回信,并邀请他参加你们的活动。
营址 | 大连 |
活动时间 | 2012年7月底,共4天 |
参加人员 | 1.全国中学生英语能力竞赛获奖者 2.中国,美国和澳大利亚的英语老师 |
活动内容 | 1.举行英语演讲比赛 2.观看学生表演 3.游览大连风景名胜 4.交流英语学习经验 |
注意:1.信须包括以上提供的内容要点,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
2.词数:100左右;
3.参考词汇:全国中学生英语能力竞赛NEPC
Dear James,
Nice to hear from you again!
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear James,
Nice to hear from you again! As you know, this summer vacation, at the end of July,2012, the winners of NEPC will go to a fourday English Summer Camp in Dalian. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia will join us. In the camp, we will have some English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Dalian. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English. I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us.
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时和一般将来时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:as放句首引导的定语从句;As you know, this summer vacation, at the end of July, 2012, the winners of NEPC will go to a fourday English Summer Camp in Dalian.过去分词做后置定语:some wonderful performances given by the students;强调I do hope you will come and join us...2.使用了过渡词语:Besides;3.使用了重要短语:hear from收到来信;places of interest名胜,景点;make some new friends交新朋友.
