Question

【题目】短文改错

短文中共有l0处语言错误，每行中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出增加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线：并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mike was one of my father’s younger brother. He has been died of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

Answer 1

【答案】

Mike was one of my father's younger . He has been of cancer for two years. When I was a teenager, he taught how to hunt in the woods the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then on to one of his hunting destinations. Just dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, I learned to be brave and through the experience.

【1】brother改成brothers

【2】died改成dead

【3】us改为me

【4】used改成using

【5】in后加a

【6】travel改为travelled

【7】after改为before

【8】and改为or

【9】去掉but

【10】patiently改为patient

【解析】

试题分析：这篇文章主要描述了作者在小时候根据叔叔打猎，从而学会了勇敢和有耐心。

【1】brother改成brothers 考查名词。根据前文的one of判断此处应用名词的复数形式，故brother改成brothers。

【2】died改成dead 考查形容词。Die非延续性动词，不可以与for two years连用，be dead表示状态，可与成段的时间状语连用。故died改成dead

【3】us改为me 考查代词。根据前文只提到作者自己，应是me。故us改为me。

【4】used改成using 考查非谓语动词。句意：我是少年的时候，他教给我如何在森林里利用黄昏之前的几个小时打猎。此处是using作方式状语。故used改成using。

【5】in后加a 考查冠词。此处的restaurant是第一次出现，并且此处表示“一家饭店”，故in后加a。

【6】travel改为travelled 考查动词时态。根据前文的left，stayed判断，此处travelled应是与它们并列，并列的谓语动词应在时态上保持一致。故travel改为travelled。

【7】after改为before 考查介词，根据上下文应该是在黄昏之前找到合适的地方，故after改为before。

【8】and改为or 考查连词。根据and前后的选择关系判断，故and改为or。

【9】去掉but 根据前文的though引导让步状语从句，主句和从句之间不可有连词连接，故去掉but。

【10】patiently改为patient 考查形容词。根据前文的be brave判断此处应用形容词形式作表语，故 patiently改为patient。