Question

【题目】假设你是高三学生李华，你的表弟王林今年将要上高中。请你给他写一封邮件，从以下两个方面提出建议，

学习方面；

课余生活方面。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不得出现考生的具体信息；

4.信的开头以为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Dear Wang lin,

I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. _________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Wang Lin,

I'm glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. As a senior 3 student, I have so much experience to share with you. High school life is full of challenges. Making good use of your time will be of great benefit to efficient study. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. High school life can be very colorful as well. I suggest you participate in some meaningful activities, such as sports and voluntary work to develop yourself properly and thoroughly. The coming three years will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts, you'll make it fruitful and wonderful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是应用文，要求学生就高中的学习状况提出自己的建议，故应用一般现在时和第二人称。

亮点说明：文章要点全，语法知识应用灵活，且使用得当，堪称佳作。文中使用了分词短语making作主语，现在分词comig作定语；高级词汇efficient，thorough等；不定式短语to preview作主语等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。