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11.你升入高中已两年了,这两年中你经历了很多,也收获很多,请你给你的父母写一封信,告诉他们你这两年来的高中生活,信中需包括以下要点:
1.远离父母,学会了独立;
2.升入高中以来认识了很多优秀的同学和老师,和他们中的很多人交了朋友,并从他们身上学到了很多东西;
3.喜欢学习数学和英语,对自己的成绩很满意;
4.课余时间参加各种课外活动,比如英语角.
注意:1.短文内容应包含以上全部信息,可补充说明或强调顺序以使短文连贯,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数.
2.词数100左右
3.英语角 the English Corner
Dear Mom and Dad,
How time flies.
It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school.Now I'd like to tell you something about my school life.
As I'm away from you,I have learned how to live on my own.And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)To my joy,I've also made friends with some of them.
I like English and math best and have made great progress.I'm pleased about that.So don't worry about my grades.Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.As a result,I'm good at English.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Xxx.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息你升入高中已两年了,这两年中你经历了很多,也收获很多,请你给你的父母写一封信,告诉他们你这两年来的高中生活,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:远离父母,学会了独立;升入高中以来认识了很多优秀的同学和老师,和他们中的很多人交了朋友,并从他们身上学到了很多东西;喜欢学习数学和英语,对自己的成绩很满意;课余时间参加各种课外活动,比如英语角.  2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:be away from距离远;on one's own独自;To my joy令我高兴的是;make great progress取得进步;Besides另外;in my spare time在我空闲时间;take part in 参加;As a result结果;
And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)
Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Mom and Dad,
       How time flies. It is almost two years since I entered the senior high school.Now I'd like to tell you something about my school life.
       As I'm away from you,I have learned how to live on my own.And I've got to know my classmates and teachers,from whom I've learned a lot.(高分句型一)To my joy,I've also made friends with some of them.
       I like English and math best and have made great progress.I'm pleased about that.So don't worry about my grades.Besides,in my spare time,I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities.(高分句型二)I often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.As a result,I'm good at English.
       Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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