题目内容
20.假定你是李华,你的外教Jill Robbins女士对中文很感兴趣,让你方便时带去书店买几本文学名著.请你给他写一封电子邮件,约她周末去书店.信的内容包括:1.鼓励她的兴趣;
2.简要介绍名著;
3.出发时间地点.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
参考词汇:四大名著four ancient classics
Dear Miss Jill Robbins,
I'm glad you are interested in the Chinese language and masterpieces,which makes me feel proud of our culture.(高分句型一)I'm sure it will enable you to understand country better,bringing great benefit to your life and work.(高分句型二)
There are a lot of wonderful novels in Chinese,the most famous of which are four ancient classics.(高分句型三)They are popular among almosteveryone.
We can go and choose these books in the bookstore this weekend.If it is convenient for you,we may meet at the school gate at 9:00 this Saturday and then we'll go there by bus.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇书信类作文,外教Jill Robbins对中文很感兴趣,邀请她周末和你一起去书店买几本中文名著.同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:
书信格式正确,根据题干对写信的对象进行调整.
介绍书信原因挑选中文书,便于读信人了解书信重点.
邀请见面的书信要说明见面的具体时间地点.
要点要齐全.但不要简单罗列要点.可以适当的加一些变化,使用连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程
【范文亮点】
1.范文采取了定语从句(I'm glad you are interested in the Chinese language and masterpieces,which makes me feel proud of our culture.)和目的状语从句(If it is convenient for you,we may meet at the school gate at 9:00 this Saturday and then we'll go there by bus.)等句式.
2.文章采用了be interested in,bring…benefit to,looking forward to等短语.
I'm glad you are interested in the Chinese language and masterpieces,which makes me feel proud of our culture.(高分句型一)
I'm sure it will enable you to understand country better,bringing great benefit to your life and work.(高分句型二)
There are a lot of wonderful novels in Chinese,the most famous of which are four ancient classics.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Miss Jill Robbins,
I'm glad you are interested in the Chinese language and masterpieces,which makes me feel proud of our culture.(高分句型一)I'm sure it will enable you to understand country better,bringing great benefit to your life and work.(高分句型二)
There are a lot of wonderful novels in Chinese,the most famous of which are four ancient classics.(高分句型三)They are popular among almost everyone.
We can go and choose these books in the bookstore this weekend.If it is convenient for you,we may meet at the school gate at 9:00 this Saturday and then we'll go there by bus.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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