题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Wang Lei and I are neighbours and we go to the same school. We have been good friend since childhood and have a great deal to share with every day. however, one day, Wang Lei copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to befriend with him any long. One Monday morning I run downstairs without realizing it was raining, but there was no time to return home to fetch umbrella. It happened when Wang Lei was just around the corner and offered to share her umbrella with me. He made an apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.
【答案】
【解析】这篇短文讲述我和我的邻居王磊一直是好朋友,由于王磊抄我的作业而不愿和他交朋友,但是王磊在一个下雨的日子主动帮助我,得到了我的原谅。
句子主语是we,“我们”,表达复数意义,宾语friend应该用复数形式。故把friend改为friends.
share在句中是不及物动词,后面搭配with时,with后面要跟宾语,此句中没有share的宾语,故去掉with.
句中angry是形容词,修饰形容词应该用so表示“如此”,such修饰名词。故把such改为so.
not…any longer不再,是固定搭配。故把long改为longer.
根据句中的时间状语one Monday morning,可知此处应该用一般过去时,run过去式为ran.故把run改为ran.
umbrella译为“伞”,是单数可数名词,上文没有提到,此处应该泛指,读音是以辅音开头,前面加不定冠词a.故把an改为a.
该句中it是形式主语,谓语是happened,后面从句是主语从句,并且从句中不缺少任何成分,应该用that引导,what在从句中应该做主语或宾语。故把what改为that.
根据上文“want to befriend with him any long”可知,wanglei是男孩,因此此处人称代词错误。故把her改为his.
句中voice是名词,应该用形容词修饰名词,gently是副词,形容词形式是gentle,故把gently改为gentle.
根据句意“我原谅了他并且给他一个拥抱”,可知,前后两分句之间是并列关系。故把but改为and.