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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today, I had a very had luck. I was fighting for fun with some classmates after physical education. I wave my arm with such great strong that my watch got loose and flew off my wrist! Just then, some girls were passing by and a flying watch hit one girl’s mouth exactly, these two teeth were knocked off. My mother was called in to deal the matter. We made an apology to the girl but took her to hospital to treat my wound.

I was teaching a great lesson in this incident. I shouldn’t have been made sudden and strong actions. From now on, I’ll take care to do anything, acting quiet and carefully!

Answer 1

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【解析】发生在过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。

such修饰名词。

特指“这块飞着的手表”，所以用定冠词the。

这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作定语，所以用whose。

Deal with是固定用法，意思是处理。

表示并列关系，所以用and。

句意：我们向这个女孩道歉，并且把她带到医院去治疗她的伤口。所以my改成her。

“我”和“教会”之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态。

“我”和“做”之间是主动关系，所以用主动语态。

用副词修饰动词。