[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday I went to see a film with my best friend Kate. We set off at 1:30 in the afternoon and plan to arrive at the cinema before 2:30 so that we could watch the 3:15 show. The traffic was terrible bad. That made it even worse was that our bus broke up on the way. They stopped a taxi but rushed to the show. “Two ticket for 3:15,” Kate said, put the money on the counter. The film started at the moment we sat down in the cinema. It was an exciting film and we had great time yesterday afternoon.

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【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文。作者和朋友Kate昨天下午去看电影。电影是令人兴奋的，她们玩得很开心。

1.考查时态。根据Yesterday可知句子用一般过去时态，此处是并列的谓语动词，故把plan改成planned。

2.考查词形转换。句意：交通糟透了。此处bad是形容词，由副词来修饰，故把terrible改成terribly。

3.考查主语从句。句意：更糟的是我们的公共汽车在路上抛锚了。此处是主语从句作主语，引导词应该在主语从句中作主语，同时其引导作用，故把That改成What。

4.考查固定词组。句意：更糟的是我们的公共汽车在路上抛锚了。固定词组：break down“发生故障”。故把up改成down。

5.考查人称代词。句意：我们拦了一辆出租车，急忙去看演出。结合句意可知把They改成We。

6.考查并列连词。句意：我们拦了一辆出租车，急忙去看演出。结合句意可知此处是并列的递进关系，故把but改成and。

7.考查名词复数。根据two可知后面的名词用复数形式，故把ticket改成tickets。

8.考查现在分词做伴随状语。句意：凯特边说边把钱放在柜台上。此处是现在分词做伴随状态。故把put改成putting。

9.考查时间状语从句。句意：我们在电影院一坐下，电影就开始了。此处名词词组the moment“一------就”，相当于as soon as，引导时间状语从句，故把the moment前的at去掉。

10.考查固定搭配。句意：那是一部令人兴奋的电影，昨天下午我们玩得很开心。固定搭配：have a great time“玩的开心”。故在great前加a。

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering were not uncommon, causing serious harms to life and the environment. That requires lots of effort to change this situation on the part of everyone. As for me, I should start from little things and it won’t be long since I acquire good habits. If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right but never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and health. Not only will I keep myself on littering and spitting, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever be possible. I hope my behavior will make the difference.

【题目】【来源】北京市海淀区2017届高三3月零模

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Our class planned to organize an activity on March 5th,the day in memory of Lei Feng.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Over the last few years,my family and I had started working towards a greener life.My mum and dad drive less and often take bus to work.They are carefully to save gas when they cook.We recycle things and we give old clothes and furnitures to the people in need.

I believe there is a lot more they can do.For example,we will try to use less water by turning on the tap when we brush our teeth.Taking shorter showers will help,either.

Save the planet needs everyone's effort.Although each one of us may only do a little,but together we can make a big different.

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。温馨提醒：改错题需按要求规范答题，否则不能得分！

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen, today I’m going to share something amazed about dolphins. For ages, the sailors have said that it is good luck to see dolphins swimming alongside boats. Their presence meant that land is near, which will be vital informations if a boat and its crew are in danger. Some dolphins have even protected sailors which suffer shipwreck from sharks. There is no wonder that these unique and fascinating creatures have long known as our friends.

Dolphins are thought to be intelligent animals because of its quick ability to learn. They seem to communicate with each other through a combination of whistles and clicks. While scientists don’t know exact what they are talking about, it is thought that dolphins are telling each other that food is nearby, or warn each other of approaching danger.

【题目】假设你是中华高中高二(11)班的班长Jim。你班将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)。希望来自附近IT公司的美国人Green女士来做评委。请参照下面比赛通知给她写一封邀请信。

注意:词数100左右。

Dear Ms. Green,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Jim

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The incident had happened on my way to a bookstore on the rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl about ten was knocked down by a passing car,that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushes to the girl to give him first aid.I joined in without hesitation.A young woman called 110 and the polices soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Comparing with the escaped driver,I am proud of that I did.

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