Question

【题目】假如你是李华。今年暑假你将参加“英国名校两周游”夏令营，计划7月份你在伦敦逗留三天 (7月13—15日），住在Wellington Hotel。你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国的学生Charlie见面, 请你给他写一封邮件，简单介绍伦敦的行程;希望见面并商量见面时间和地点。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计人总词数。

Dear Charlie，

How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Charlie,

How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit. How is everything going with you and your family? My parents and I miss you very much.

This summer vacation, I will join a two-week camp to visit some of the famous universities in the UK. It is scheduled that we will stay in London from July 12th to 15th .

I want to see you very much. I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon of July 14th at Wellington Hotel, where we will be staying. We won’t have any planned activities then. Please let me know if it is convenient for you.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于提纲式作文。

根据提示信息写一封邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：1、暑假你将参加"英国名校两周游"夏令营，计划7月份你在伦敦逗留三天 （7月13-15日），住在Wellington Hotel．你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国的学生Charlie见面，请你给他写一封邮件，简单介绍伦敦的行程；希望见面并商量见面时间和地点。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。3．注意使用高级词汇和句式，适当增加一些细节和连接词，使上下文流畅，衔接自然，以增加文章的亮点。

亮点说明：本文结构紧凑，层次分明，要点齐全，上下文连贯，而且使用了一定数量的句式结构，使句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高了文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练驾驭能力。例如：It is scheduled that we will stay in London from July 13th to 15th． it作形式主语，that为真正的主语从句；I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon of July 14th at Wellington Hotel，where we will be staying．句中if为宾语从句，where为定语从句。