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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

With the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become popular means of transport, bring great convenience to our life. Therefore, they have also caused some problems such as air pollutions and traffic jams.

How can we solve these problems then? As far as I am concerning, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmental friendly because of they won’t give off waste gas. Besides, riding bicycles was a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial for our health.

As a result, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join them.

【答案】第一处:在popular前面加a

第二处:bringbringing

第三处:ThereforeHowever

第四处:pollutionspollution

第五处:concerning concerned

第六处:environmental environmentally

第七处:去掉of

第八处:wasis

第九处:forto

第十处:themus

【解析】

这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲了随着人们生活水平的提高,汽车已经成为一种流行的交通工具,给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。然而,它们也造成了一些问题,如空气污染和交通堵塞。作者建议,骑自行车是一种很好的锻炼方式。

第一处:考查冠词。句意:随着人们生活水平的提高,汽车已经成为一种流行的交通工具,给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。泛指“一种流行的交通工具”,popular首字母发音是辅音,所以在popular前面加a。

第二处:考查现在分词。句意:随着人们生活水平的提高,汽车已经成为一种流行的交通工具,给我们的生活带来了极大的便利。“汽车”和“给我们的生活带来了极大的便利”之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语,所以bring改成bringing

第三处:考查副词。句意:然而,它们也造成了一些问题,如空气污染和交通堵塞。文中表示“然而”,所以Therefore改成However

第四处:考查名词。句意:然而,它们也造成了一些问题,如空气污染和交通堵塞。pollution是不可数名词,所以pollutions改成pollution

第五处:考查固定短语。句意:就我而言,骑自行车是一个很好的解决办法。as far as I am concerned就我而言,该短语是固定短语,所以concerning 改成concerned

第六处:考查副词。句意:另一方面,自行车是环保的,因为它们不会排放废气。修饰形容词friendly,用副词,所以environmental改成 environmentally

第七处:考查常见用法。句意:另一方面,自行车是环保的,因为它们不会排放废气。because后面接句子,而because of后面接成分,这里接的是句子,所以去掉of

第八处:考查时态。句意:此外,骑自行车是一种很好的锻炼方式,它对我们的健康有益。 描述一个客观的事实,用一般现在时,所以was改成is

第九处:考查固定用法。句意:此外,骑自行车是一种很好的锻炼方式,它对我们的健康有益。be beneficial to有益于,该用法是固定用法,所以for改成to

第十处:考查代词。句意:因此,让我们通过骑自行车来承担起建设低碳城市的责任。来加入我们吧。文中表示“来加入我们”,所以them改成us

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【题目】 Eric Davis got interested in firefighting when he was in the army. And while much of his job today is related to EMS(emergency medical services)his first love is fighting fires. "I enjoy the job and working with people. I enjoy firefighting.” he says.

Davis studied in a firefighting school for about three months and took part in classroom workphysical exerciseand hands-on training such as fighting live fires in buildings filled with straw.

Davis says the blindfold(蒙眼的)training prepared him for real fires. "By the time we get to a fireif it’s going pretty goodthe whole house will be filled with smoke. And anytime you get near the fire, you won’t be able to see at all. Zero visibility(能见性)is the same as darkness. The blindfold training works.”

Davis believes his most important duty is making sure he’s prepared for any situation he might come across. To keep physically fithe runs several times a week and works out. He takes classes to keep up his skills and trains regularly by fighting practice fires. Sometimes this includes cutting holes in roofs, which helps allow smoke to pass out and improves visibility for firefighters inside the building.

Firefighting means plenty of risks. BesidesDavis says·"You have to be willing to help any person you come across.” If someone is trappedDavis or another firefighter will put himself at risk to get the person out. Davis says he is not afraid when he’s fighting a fire. He does what’s needed.

1What is David’s main duty at present?

A.Providing emergency medical care.B.Fighting fires in tall buildings.

C.Giving firefighters training.D.Saving people trapped in fires.

2Where did David learn firefighting?

A.In the army.B.In the hospital.}

C.In the classroom.D.In a professional school.

3Why were learners trained blindfold?

A.To experience how the blind feel.B.To protect their eyes from the smoke.

C.To recreate a real fire situation.D.To prepare for firefighting at night.

4What can we infer about Davis?

A.He was once an army man.

B.He tries his best to be a good firefighter.

C.He helps improve the working conditions.

D.He is worried about the safety of firefighters.

【题目】Summary

Fishing is probably the world’s most popular sport. People spend many dollars each year on items like boats and four-wheel-drive vehicles. In addition, they spend money on fishing equipment, bait, fuel and boat repairs. And you can see that fishing can be an expensive pastime. Fishing lovers believe that their hobby is worth it. Others say that fishing is spoiling the environment and that it is a cruel hobby.

Supporters of fishing say that it is a nice hobby. Firstly, of the millions of people who fish for fun, most only catch enough fish to feed their families. They catch fish that are found in large numbers, so there is little danger to the species.

Secondly, recreational fishermen contribute to the economy. They spend money on equipment and other items, and they also spend it indirectly by paying taxes on their equipment and fuel. Those who travel to fishing spots pay for accommodation and airfares. This money keeps people in work and provides new jobs each year.

Thirdly, fishing is relaxing and fun so it lessens stress. Instead of turning to drugs or alcohol, it is far better to go fishing. People who are relaxed are generally healthier and much nicer to be near –except for the smell of the bait!

Those who disagree with fishing say that there are too many fish thoughtlessly taken from rivers, lakes, streams and oceans. This could lead to the dying out of some species. Modern cars and boats mean that people can fish in remote areas of the world, so no place is safe from greedy fishermen who take both males and females, leaving few fish to produce young.

Those against fishing also say that it is a blood sport, which means that an animal must die so that a human can have fun. Many of the fish caught for sport are not suitable for eating, so they are thrown away. Once hooked, fish have no chance of escape.

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