Question

10．你的英国笔友Johnson下个学期要来你校交流学习，请你写一封100字左右的etmail，介绍你学校的基本情况，内容应该包含下列几个方面：课程安排，作息时间，食堂就餐，社团活动．开头已经为你写好．
Dear Johnson，
So nice to hear that you are coming next semester．                                                      

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 你的英国笔友Johnson下个学期要来你校交流学习，请你写一封100字左右的etmail，介绍你学校的基本情况．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：课程安排，作息时间，食堂就餐，社团活动    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be eager to渴望去做；Actually事实上；the same as 和…一样；Approximately 大约；
Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK，namely Chinese，math，chemistry，physics，PE，biology，and of course，English．（高分句型一）
Morning lessons start at 7：40，with each lasting 40 minutes．Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen，after which you will have a break for about an hour，and then take afternoon lessons at 1：40 p．m．（高分句型二）
Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school，ranging from hiking，bicycling，football，basketball to music，debating，and theater．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Johnson，
      So nice to hear that you are coming next semester．You must be eager to know what it is like to study here．Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK，namely Chinese，math，chemistry，physics，PE，biology，and of course，English．（高分句型一）Morning lessons start at 7：40，with each lasting 40 minutes．Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen，after which you will have a break for about an hour，and then take afternoon lessons at 1：40 p．m．（高分句型二）Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school，ranging from hiking，bicycling，football，basketball to music，debating，and theater．（高分句型三）You will certainly find your stay here enjoyable．
      Hope to see you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．