Question

19．假设你是Kate，上周，你班召开了一次班会，下面是你班班会上以"中学生是否能佩带手机"为题进行讨论的情况．请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况，并表明你自己的观点．
注意：1、所列的要点可做参考，但不要逐句翻译；
2、字数约100字； 
3、信的开头和结尾已写好
4、生词：辐射radiation 奢侈的luxurious 亲戚relative
比例       40%学生赞同                       60%学生不赞同
理由   1、便于同亲友联系；              1、手机辐射对人体健康有害．
2、可以上网查资料；                        2、响铃影响自己和他人学习；
3、空余时间玩玩游戏调节大脑；       3、属奢侈品；
4、存储有用信息．                            4、容易引起相互攀比．
Dear Sir，
 I'm writing to tell you thatWhether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones （Cell-phones） at the class meeting．
Forty percent students agreed，for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends．（高分句型一） They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the m．Besides，they could play games for rest if they feel tired after a long time's study．
However，sixty percent of us were against it．They said the radiation of cell-phones was harmful to health，and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cell-phone holders and others．（高分句型二）Also，cell-phones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other．
As far as I am concerned，I agree with the majority．It is not suitable for middle school students to have cell-phones．We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves．（高分句型三）
Best wishes．
Yours，
Kate．

Answer 1

分析 本次作文是属于陈述两个对立观点+自己观点的模式，讨论中学生是否能佩带手机这个话题，这种模式首先要阐述这个现象，然后分述对此现象的两个对立的观点，最后阐明自己的观点．段落要明确，一般分三段来阐述，第一段阐述现象和正面观点，第二段反面观点，最后一段自己的观点．注意使用高级的短语和句型，经常用到的句子有：Every coin has two sides．As far as I'm concerned，…等．还要注意句与句的关联．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
Forty percent students agreed，for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends．（高分句型一）
They said the radiation of cell-phones was harmful to health，and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cell-phone holders and others．（高分句型二）
We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
       I'm writing to tell you  that Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones （Cell-phones）  at the class meeting．
       Forty percent students agreed，for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends．（高分句型一） They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the m．Besides，they could play games for rest if they feel tired after a long time's study．
       However，sixty percent of us were against it．They said the radiation of cell-phones was harmful to health，and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cell-phone holders and others．（高分句型二）Also，cell-phones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other．
       As far as I am concerned，I agree with the majority．It is not suitable for middle school students to have cell-phones．We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves．（高分句型三）
        Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Kate

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．