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20．网络购物逐渐成为我们生活的一个有机部分，请你用英文给China Daily写一封信，谈谈网络购物的利弊以及你的看法．
要点如下：
1．优点（方便、快捷、质优、价廉）；
2．缺点（质量无法保证、售后态度不好）；
3．你的看法．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear editor，
With the fast development of e-commerce，online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of our life．The popularity of online shopping definitely has its own reasons．First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）But the other side of the coin is also true．Goods bought online are not as fine as those from the store which you can watch，feel and smell by yourself．Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）
In my opinion，we should improve our e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase．Meanwhile，as online customers，we should be cautious while shopping online．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息网络购物逐渐成为我们生活的一个有机部分，请你用英文给China Daily写一封信，谈谈网络购物的利弊以及你的看法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：优点（方便、快捷、质优、价廉）；缺点（质量无法保证、售后态度不好）；你的看法． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象
．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要
表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：With the fast development of 随着…的发展；First and foremost首先并重要的是；Besides另外；In my opinion以我的观点来看；Meanwhile同时；
First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）
Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）
Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear editor，
       With the fast development of e-commerce，online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of our life．
       The popularity of online shopping definitely has its own reasons．First and foremost，online shopping usually means something you buy are both cheaper in price and better in quality．（高分句型一）Besides，goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently，saving your tiredness of shopping and walking．（高分句型二）But the other side of the coin is also true．Goods bought online are not as fine as those from the store which you can watch，feel and smell by yourself．Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods．（高分句型三）
       In my opinion，we should improve our e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase．Meanwhile，as online customers，we should be cautious while shopping online．
       Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．