Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误。每句中至多有两处错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

John, a heavy smoker, once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he turned to his doctor for help. “Quit smoking,” the doctor advised. Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating, inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, “One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day of me to break away from the bad habit…” Then he picked up a cigarette which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it “tomorrow”. Today John is still addicted for smoking.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】feel改为felt

【2】Find改为Finding

【3】healthy改为 health

【4】hour改为hours

【5】have a difficulty的a去掉

【6】what改为which

【7】(加and)I will quit it tomorrow.

【8】of改为for

【9】her改为him

【10】for改为to

【解析】

试题分析：文章介绍烟民John戒烟的过程，但最后还是没戒掉。

【1】feel改为felt 考查时态。此文用过去时态描述，故将feel改为felt。

【2】Find改为Finding 考查非谓语动词。此处不是句子，故用非谓语动词，它的逻辑主语是John，两者是主动关系，故将find改为finding，大写。

【3】healthy改为 health 考查名词和形容词转换。此处应用名词，故将healthy改为 health。

【4】hour改为hours考查名词单复数。前面有several，故用复数，hours。

【5】have a difficulty的a去掉 考查冠词。此处为固定搭配have difficulty in doing：做某事有困难。故去掉a。

【6】what改为which 考查关系代词。此处为非限制性定语从句，指代前面整个句子，故用which。

【7】(加and)I will quit it tomorrow. 考查连接词。此处为固定句型：祈使句/名词（短语）+and/but/or/……+主句，前后部分之间是承接关系，故加一个and。

【8】of改为for 考查介词。此处意为对我来说，故用for。

【9】her改为him 考查代词。此处是指John，男的，故用him。

【10】for改为to考查介词。addicted to是固定搭配，故改为to。