Question

【题目】在日常生活中，人们对于体育锻炼所持的观点各不同，请你以 “ Health means wealth”为题写一篇短文，号召人们坚持健康积极的生活方式：每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子。

要点如下：

1. 大多数人认为健康就是一切。

2. 一些年轻人在闲暇时打牌、上网等，认为他们还很健康没必要锻炼。

3. 一些人只顾工作赚钱，认为钱就是一切。

4. 你的观点：……

注意：词数 100左右；开头已给出

提示词： wealth 财富

2.不能逐句翻译。为使行文流畅，可适当增减细节

Health means wealth

In our daily life, people hold different opinions about taking exercises.

Answer 1

【答案】

Health means wealth

In our daily life, people hold different opinions about taking exercises. Most of the people hold the belief that if they are healthy, they will have everything．Some of the young spend their holidays playing cards on online games, believing that they are healthy and there is no need for them to do sports．Some of them even continue to make more money, which means everything to them．

As far as I am concerned, I don’t think what some of the young people do in their spare time is right．Games and money cannot bring us real happiness and wealth．Health is the most important thing for us and it can help us to do something that we want to do．We should all remember: exercise one hour a day, healthy work in fifty years, a happy life for life．

【解析】

试题分析：在日常生活中，人们对于体育锻炼所持的观点各不同，请你以 “ Health means wealth”为题写一篇短文，号召人们坚持健康积极的生活方式：每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子。要点如下：1. 大多数人认为健康就是一切。2. 一些年轻人在闲暇时打牌、上网等，认为他们还很健康没必要锻炼。3. 一些人只顾工作赚钱，认为钱就是一切。4. 你的观点：……写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数 100左右；开头已给出 提示词： wealth 财富2.不能逐句翻译。为使行文流畅，可适当增减细节。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。现在分词做伴随状语：Some of the young spend their holidays playing cards on online games, believing that they are healthy and there is no need for them to do sports．非限制性定语从句的使用Some of them even continue to make more money, which means everything to them．主语从句的使用I don’t think what some of the young people do in their spare time is right．