题目内容
【题目】假如你(李华)的网友John即将外出旅行,请你根据以下提示,用英语给他写封电子邮件,向他介绍你对旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事项。
内容提示:1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。放松身心,有益健康。
2. 旅行前的准备。了解天气,带好衣服、相机、常用药品等。
3. 旅行时注意饮食卫生和安全,防止小偷。
要求:1、适当添加内容;行文连贯。2、词数:120词左右
Dear John,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear that you are going to travel. Now I’d like to share my view on travelling with you.
In my opinion, travelling is a very good activity. When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time, you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health.
In order to have a pleasant journey, you need to make full preparations ahead of time. You’d better have clear information about the weather, and bring proper clothes, a camera, some medicine for common injuries and diseases and so on.。On your journey, you must pay attention to what you eat. Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen.
Do you agree with me? Wish you a good journey.
Yours, LiHua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文要求假如你(李华)的网友John即将外出旅行,请你根据提示,用英语给他写封电子邮件,向他介绍你对旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事项。要点包括:1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。放松身心,有益健康。2. 旅行前的准备。了解天气,带好衣服、相机、常用药品等。3. 旅行时注意饮食卫生和安全,防止小偷。故既要完成任务,又要兼顾形式的要求。
写作亮点:本篇条理清楚,要点全面,结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅,也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如:文章运用了宾语从句that you are going to travel.和what you eat倒装句Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health. share with, activity, make full preparations ahead of time, You’d better, pay attention to, Be careful with, in case, gets stolen等词汇和In my opinion等连接词。
