Question

【题目】假定你是李华, 夏至将近, 中国有“冬至饺子夏至面”的传统，请写信邀请你校外教Andy参加你班举行的制作面条活动。内容包括：

1.时间和地点；

2.活动安排；

3.期待答复。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：夏至the summer solstice

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Andy,

How is everything going recently? I am delighted to tell you something that our class will hold an activity to make noodles. As a monitor, on behalf of my classmates, I am writing to invite you to join us.

The activity is to be held in our class on June 21stand will last 2 hours from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm. Apart from competition in making noodles, we have other kinds of activities, such as telling stories about the summer solstice, singing and dancing, which will create a joyful atmosphere and enrich students' cultural knowledge.

Your participation will be appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Lihua.

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教Andy写信，邀请她参加你办举行的制作面条活动。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1.时间和地点；

2.活动安排；

3.期待答复。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be delighted to do sth./ on behalf of/ invite sb. to do sth./ apart from/ tell stories/ enrich/ participation/ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. How is everything going recently?

2. I am delighted to tell you something that our class will hold an activity to make noodles.

3. As a monitor, on behalf of my classmates, I am writing to invite you to join us.

4. The activity is to be held in our class on June 21stand will last 2 hours from 7:00 pm to 9:00 pm.

5.Apart from competition in making noodles, we have other kinds of activities, such as telling stories about the summer solstice, singing and dancing, which will create a joyful atmosphere and enrich students' cultural knowledge.

6. Your participation will be appreciated.

7. Looking forward to your early reply.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）