Question

20．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误只涉及到一个单词的增加、删除 或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并且在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改后仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者从（第十一处）起不记分．
Nowadays，TV PK Shows （选秀节目）have attracted many young people．As for me，they have both positive and negative effect．Therefore，most important thing is how we see it．Some people think the shows provided grass-root people with a stage to display their．talents，but they should catch every opportunity to show off their talents．Some students even give in their studies to attend them in the hope of become famous overnight．But others people hold the shows may destroy young people．Once that they fail in these shows?they will suffer a great unbalance．This is real bad for them physically and mentally．

Answer 1

分析 本段文字讲述了作者对现在流行的选秀节目的看法．作者认为选秀节目具有两面性，既有积极作用，也有消极影响，最重要的是怎么样去看待．但是
有些学生为了一夜成名甚至放弃了学习，一旦失败了对他们的身体和精神都会产生很坏的影响，这是不可取的．

解答 Nowadays，TV PK Shows （选秀节目）have attracted many young people．As for me，they have both positive and negative effect．Therefore，
                                                                                                                                                                                      effects 
∧most important thing is how we see it．Some people think the shows provided grass-root people with a stage to display their talents，but they
the                                                 them                                            provide                                                                                     so
should catch every opportunity to show off their talents．Some students even give in their studies to attend them in the hope of  become  famous
                                                                                                                         up                                                               becoming
overnight．But others people hold the shows may destroy young people．Once that  they fail in these shows?they will suffer a great unbalance．
                        other                                                                                    去掉that
This is real bad for them physically and mentally．
          really

1．effect改为effects；考查名词复数，effect作为"效果，影响"讲时是可数名词，根据句意这里应该用复数形式．
2．most前面加the；考查形容词最高级形式，形容词或副词的最高级前要加定冠词the．
3．it改为them；考查代词，这里指代的是上一句中的effects，所以用them．
4．provided改为provide；考查动词时态，整体理解短文应该用一般现在时，主语是shows，所以谓语用动词原形．
5．but改为so；考查连词，根据句意这一句与上句应该是一种因果关系，所以用so表"因此"．
6．in改为up；考查介词，give in意为"屈服"，give up意为"放弃"，结合句意这里意思是"一些学生放弃了学习"，所以应该是give up．
7．become改为becoming；考查介词的用法，介词of后面要跟名词或名词性短语，故用becoming．
8．others改为other；考查词性，others是代词，泛指其它的人或物，other是形容词，意为"其它的"others=other+名词复数．所以这里要
    把others改为other，或者去掉people．
10．real改为really；考查副词，这里修饰的是形容词bad，所以用副词形式．

点评 短文改错是要先通读全文，了解文章基本大意，然后细读短文，分析句子结构和句群关系，运用所掌握的词汇，语法，固定搭配等基础
知识找出文中错误并加以修改．