题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every year, my parents and I pay visit to my grandparents in my hometown.
To be honestly, I didn’t want to go this year. You know, my hometown in their memory was so dirty. Rubbish could be seen everywhere, that annoyed me a lot. After thinking for some moment, I asked my parents that whether we could let my grandparents come and stay with us. Heard this, they just smiled.
When I got on the bus, I was surprised to find that the village was very clean that I hardly recognized it. Then I decide to visit my grandparents more often.
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【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。作者每年都要和父母回老家去看祖父母,但今年作者不想去,因为在作者记忆中的老家是如此肮脏,垃圾随处可见。但是当下车时,惊奇地发现村子很干净,作者几乎认不出来了。作者决定经常去看望作者的祖父母。
第一处:考查冠词。句意:每年,父母和我都要去看望老家的祖父母。pay a visit to“拜访.......”为固定短语。故pay后加a。
第二处:考查固定短语。句意:实话实说,我今年不想去。to be honest“说实在的”为固定短语。故honestly改成honest。
第三处:考查代词。句意:你知道,我记忆中的家乡是如此肮脏。本句指在作者的记忆中,所以代词为my。故their改成my。
第四处:考查关系代词。句意:垃圾随处可见,这让我很恼火。分析句子可知,which为非限制性定语从句的关系代词,代替前面的整个句子,在定语从句中作主语。故that改成which。
第五处:考查名词复数。句意:思考了一会儿,我问我的父母,我们是否可以让我的祖父母来和我们住在一起。moment为可数名词,且有some修饰。故moment改成moments。
第六处:考查连接代词。句意:思考了一会儿,我问我的父母,我们是否可以让我的祖父母来和我们住在一起,和我们在一起。分析句子可知,ask后接whether引导的宾语从句,所以that多余。故去掉that。
第七处:考查现在分词。句意:听到这个,他们只是笑了笑。分析句子可知,主语they与hear在逻辑上是主动关系,所以用现在分词。故Heard改成Hearing。
第八处:考查介词。句意:当我下车时,我惊奇地发现村子很干净,我几乎认不出来了。get off“下车”符合句意。故on改成off。
第九处:考查固定用法。句意:当我下车时,我惊奇地发现村子很干净,我几乎认不出来了。分析句子可知,本句为so......that 引导的结果状语从句。故very改成so。
第十处:考查一般过去时。句意:然后我决定经常去看望我的祖父母。分析句子可知,本句为一般过去时。故decide改成decided。
【题目】
The Survey of Chinese Nationwide Bodybuilding Activities shows that there is an increase in the number of people who are participating in physical exercise.More than 40% of the Chinese people became frequent doers of body exercise in 2015,an increase of about 7% from 2008,according to the General Administration of Sport. Teenagers aged between 6 and 19 are the most enthusiastic participants of body exercise,compared to other age groups.Playground games are their No.1 choice,followed by others such as running,basketball and rope jumping.About 3 quarters of people aged over 20 take exercise during the evening hours.Jogging and running are the two most popular sports. |
写作内容
1.用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词谈谈你对此现象的看法,内容包括:
(1)简要分析越来越多的人喜欢锻炼的主要原因;
(2)根据你的分析,从社会和个人两方面谈谈你从这一现象中得到的启示(不少于两点)。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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