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5．假设你是李华，你在一个英文网络论坛上看到一个名叫Tim的中学生发帖寻求帮助，请你根据帖子内容和写作要点回帖．| Tim Post at 10-3-2013 20：10 |
| Hi，everyone， I'm a Senior 1 student．I can't get on well with my new classmates．I have no friends and I am feeling lonely and upset．What should I do？ |
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和格式已给出，但不计入总词数．
Hi，Tim，
Sorry to hear that you're not getting along well with your new classmates．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．
分析 考察提纲类作文．本文的话题是如何正确面对心理压力，告诉对方心理压力是很正常的现象．对人的身心健康也有很大的影响，一定要引起重视，而且要积极地面对它．在采取措施方面要注意劳逸结合，多和家人朋友交流，缓解各种不适情况．写作时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度．在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升．
亮点句型一：Do you often say something that may hurt others feelings？你常说些伤害别人感情的话吗？本句是一个含有定语从句 that may hurt others feelings的句子，被修饰的先行词是something，在定语从句中做主语．
亮点句型二：Second，it's advisable to take an active part in various activities．第二，积极参加各种活动是明智的．句中it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to take an active part in various activities．
解答 Hi，Tim，
Sorry to hear that you're not getting along well with your new classmatesAs a student of your age，I understand your situation．Everyone needs friends and we are afraid of lonliness．So it's time for you to change your present situation．Here are some suggestions．【表达对Tim现状的看法】
First of all，you should know why you can't get along with your classmates．Are you too busy to speak to your classmates first？Do you often say something that may hurt others feelings？（亮点句型一）If so，try to make a change．Second，it's advisable to take an active part in various activities．（亮点句型二）In doing so，you will become popular among your classmates．【提出建议】
Hope my suggestions may be of some help．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．
点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
How has this speed of communication changed the world？To many people，the world has become smaller．Of course this does not mean that the world is actually physically smaller．It means that the world seems smaller．Two hundred years ago，communication between the continents took a long time．All news was carried on ships that took weeks or even months to cross the ocean．In the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries，it took six weeks for news from Europe to reach America．This time difference influenced people's actions．For example，one battle，or fight，in the War of 1812 between England and the United States could have been avoided．A peace agreement had already been signed．Peace was made in England，but the news of peace took six weeks to reach America．During these six weeks，the large and serious Battle of New Orleans was fought．Many people lost their lives after a peace treaty （条约）had been signed．In the past，communication took much more time than it does now．
There was a good reason why the world seemed so much larger than it does today．
| Title：The World Is Getting（76）smaller | |
| Theme | It becomes easy for people to （77）communicatewith each other because of television，telephone，radio，telegraph and the Internet． |
| Ideas and news of events spread quickly （78）throughoutthe world． | |
| Examples （nowadays） | People can know the results of an election being （79）heldin another country within seconds． |
| An international football match comes into the homes of everyone with a （80）televisionset． | |
| News of a disaster （81）likean earthquake or a flood can bring help from distant countries within hours． | |
| Information goes fast （82）dueto modern technology． | |
| Examples （in the past） | Two （83）centuries_ago，communication between the continents took a long time． |
| The news of peace agreement made in （84）Englandtook six weeks to reach America． | |
| Conclusion | Now communication takes （85）lesstime than it did in the past．So the world is getting smaller and smaller． |
| 家长 | 生活上的照顾 |
| 学校 | 提供了方便（延长图书馆和教室的开放时间…） |
| 老师 | 学习上给予的帮助（鼓励，答疑解难…） |
| 你自己 | 感受和打算，至少两点 |
1．必须包括主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯、完整；
2．词数：120词左右；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数内．
I'm a senior 3student．The college entrance exam is on the wayI'm a senior 3 student．The college entrance exam is on the wayand everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways．At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．（高分句型）Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．（高分句型）Meanwhile，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．（高分句型）
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．（高分句型）．
| 原因： | 1．晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可多睡一会儿； |
| 2．家长太忙无暇顾及，给钱让孩子自己解决； | |
| 3．一些女孩子为保持苗条身材而一些男生则为了减肥不吃早餐． | |
| 结果： | 1．整天昏昏欲睡，记忆力下降； |
| 2．上课注意力不能集中； | |
| 3．考试成绩不理想． | |
| 建议： | 1．早餐不可少，它提供全天所需能量的30%，且有助于创造能力的培养； 2．青少年健康应从早餐抓起． 3．自己的建议（至少2点） |
2．词数：120左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内．
3．参考词汇：创造能力 creative abilities
A recent study shows that nearly 30 percent of the high school students do not have breakfast．
| 简述雾霾情况 | 倡导绿色生活 |
| 持续三周左右 影响全国多地 给生活造成不便 … | 乘坐公交出行 节约水电纸张 … |
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数．
3．词数：100～120．
Greener Life，Cleaner Air．
| 赞同 | 反对 |
| 课间忘记，上课后要去属于正常 | 不妥，影响课堂秩序 |
| 如果不让去，上课也不安心，无法集中注意力听讲． | 影响本人和同学的学习 |
| 不让去会影响健康 | 应该养成好习惯，学会控制自己 |
| 个人认为：低年级可以允许，但高年级不应该鼓励 | |
2．标题已经给出．
Is it OK to permit students to go to the toilet during class？