假如你叫李华.是某校高三学生．高考在即.看到每天家人和学校为自己做的一切.深有感触．请根据下表提示写一篇短文．家长生活上的照顾学校提供了方便(延长图书馆和教室的开放时间-)老师学习上给予的帮助你自己感受和打算.至少两点注意:1．必须包括主要内容.可以适当增减细节.使内容连贯.完整,2．词数:120词左右,3．开头已给出.不计入总词数内题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

题目内容

13．假如你叫李华，是某校高三学生．高考在即，看到每天家人和学校为自己做的一切，深有感触．请根据下表提示写一篇短文．

家长	生活上的照顾
学校	提供了方便（延长图书馆和教室的开放时间…）
老师	学习上给予的帮助（鼓励，答疑解难…）
你自己	感受和打算，至少两点

注意：
1．必须包括主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯、完整；
2．词数：120词左右；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数内．
I'm a senior 3student．The college entrance exam is on the wayI'm a senior 3 student．The college entrance exam is on the wayand everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways．At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．（高分句型）Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．（高分句型）Meanwhile，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．（高分句型）
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．（高分句型）．

分析文章题材和体裁已经给出，无需考生过多考虑．而考生重点要注意审题，只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性．审题主要要做到以下几点：①分清层次和段落，切勿平铺直叙，"一逗到底"．②句式﹑词汇要尽量多样，恰当使用较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇．③文章衔接紧密，过渡自然，恰当使用好连接词或过渡性词汇．④注意书写的整齐、美观，并正确使用标点符号．
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了高中教材中出现的词汇，短语，语法，句式，如：At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．这句话用了现在分词做状语，Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．这句话用了让步状语从句，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．这句话用了provide sth for sb"提供某人某物"，At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．这句话用了so that…引导的目的状语从句，I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．这两句话都用了不定式，还有范文中还有Meanwhile，这样的关联词使文章更加连贯．

解答 I'm a senior 3 student．The college entrance exam is on the way and everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways．At school，all the teachers work very hard，encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study．（高分句型）Whenever we meet with difficulties，they are ready to come to our help．（高分句型）Meanwhile，our school also provides good facilities for us students，for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends．At home，our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy．（高分句型）
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers．I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam．I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future．（高分句型）

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

练习册系列答案

A The products which contain real fruit are popular with people．
B．Even products advertised as more natural often contained no fruit．
C They found that about 60percent of them didn't contain any fruit at all
D．If companies can cut their costs by using flavoring，they are likely to do so．
E．It is important and necessary to demand a small amount of flavoring in the products
F．Actually the product contains just a tiny percentage of strawberry or even no fruit at al1．
G．The Food commission suggested all flavors used in a product should be listed on the packaging

4．The seven Cs of a good letter
What is the secret of writing a good letter？Here are two main ones．Don't try to be fancy．Don't try to impress your reader．You will be successful if you follow these seven Cs．
Clear．Use short，direct sentences．（71）CTalk as if the reader were right there with you．Above all，don't use an introduction．
Correct．（72）EDon't guess，even for spelling．Refer to your dictionary．If you need to，check a reference book too．Use them as much as you need to．
Complete．Don't scatter our points．（73）GThis is good organization too．
Courteous．Be friendly rather than overly casual．Present your information nicely even if you are complaining about something．In all letters，treat others as you want them to treat you．
Concise．Make each point as clearly and briefly as you can．
Conversational．This is really the secret of good writing，（74）ASuch a letter has a natural，friendly tone．Let your personality come through naturally．
Considerate．（75）BWrite about what you believe the reader needs or wants to know．Try to be helpful．This will build good feeling toward you．
The seven Cs are about writing letters．But how about school papers？Use the seven Cs．Write as if you are talking to your teacher or professor．You'll be surprised．You'll almost instantly become a good writer．And you might even enjoy writing from now on

A．Just"talk"to the person
B．Think of the readers'point of view as you write．
C．Make them easy to understand．
D．Include long sentences in your letter．
E．Make sure what you say is correct．
F．Writing should not be taken too seriously．
G．Finish one point completely before going on to the next．

1．（71）EYou probably think you will never be a top student．This is not necessarily so，however．Anyone can become a better student if he or she wants to．Here's how：Plan your time carefully．When planning your work，you should make a list of things that you have to do．After making this list，you should make a schedule of your time．First your time for eating，sleeping，dressing，etc．Then decide a good，regular time for studying．（72）BA weekly schedule may not solve all your problems，but it will force you realize what is happening to your time．Find a good place to study．Look around the house for a good study area．Keep this space，which may be a desk or simply a corner of your room，free of everything but study materials．No games，radios，or television．When you sit down to study，concentrate on the subject．Make good use of your time in class．（73）CListening carefully in class means less work later．Taking notes will help you remember what the teacher says．Study regularly．When you get home from school，go over your notes，review the important points that your teacher is going to discuss the next day，read that material．（74）GIf you do these things regularly，the material will become more meaningful，and you'll remember it longer．Develop a good attitude towards tests．The purpose of a test is to show what you have learned about a subject．They help you remember your new knowledge．The world won't end if you don't pass a test，so don't be over worried．（75）AYou will probably discover them after you have tried these．

A．There are other methods that might help you with your studying．
B．Don't forget to set aside enough time for entertainment．
C．Take advantage of class time to listen to everything the teacher says．
D．No one can become a top student unless he or she works hard．
E．Maybe you are an average student．
F．Make full use of class time to take notes of．

8．假如你的名字叫张勇，你的美国笔友John想了解你进入高中后的英语课外阅读情况．请你根据下面提示，给他回一封电子邮件．

阅读现状	以英文报纸为主；偶尔简单的故事书…；几乎没有经典类的英语读物
原因分析	1．阅读时间少； 2．没有养成阅读英语的习惯； 3．词汇量小，认为经典类太难，没有尝试或不感兴趣…
未来打算	…

注意：
1．根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯．
2．词数120-150．开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．
英语课外阅读：English extracurricular reading；经典英语读物：classic English books．
Dear John，
Thank you for your email．Now I would like to tell you something about my English reading in senior high school．
．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Yong．

18．There have been many frequent plane crashes in recent years．It is reported that again there is _______ French plane crashing in the south of Alps on 24March，2015．（　　）

5．假设你是李华，你在一个英文网络论坛上看到一个名叫Tim的中学生发帖寻求帮助，请你根据帖子内容和写作要点回帖．

Tim Post at 10-3-2013 20：10

Hi，everyone，
I'm a Senior 1 student．I can't get on well with my new classmates．I have no friends
and I am feeling lonely and upset．What should I do？

写作要点：1．表达你对Tim所处现状（present situation）的看法； 2．至少给出两条建议．
注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和格式已给出，但不计入总词数．
Hi，Tim，
Sorry to hear that you're not getting along well with your new classmates．

Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

2．每年的4月23日是"世界读书日"．尽管在科技日益发达的今天，人们获取知识与信息的途径有很多，我们还是鼓励更多的人阅读．请以Reading-A Bright Way to A Better life 为题写一篇英语作文，要点包括下表中的信息．

阅读的好处	便于获取信息；拓宽视野
	有利于人际交流
	丰富生活
阅读需要注意的几个方面	选择好书
	良好习惯
	长期坚持
你的观点	喜欢阅读的内容（概括）…
你的观点	坚持阅读的体会…

注意：1．词数150左右．
2．不要纯粹照点翻译．
3．文中不能出现真实姓名．
Reading-A Bright Way to A Better life
Knowledge may be acquired through many ways，the best of which is reading．In the age of high technology，reading deserves to be paid attention to．
．

3．They are living with their parents for the moment because their own houseis being rebuilt（rebuild）

试题分类