Question

10．假如你是李华，对今年一月出现的严重雾霾（heavy smog）记忆犹新，认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益．请根据下列要点写一篇短文，向校刊"英语角"栏目投稿．

简述雾霾情况	倡导绿色生活
持续三周左右 影响全国多地 给生活造成不便 …	乘坐公交出行 节约水电纸张 …

注意：1．可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
2．标题已给出，不计入总词数．
3．词数：100～120．
Greener Life，Cleaner Air．

Answer 1

分析 考查表格类作文的写作．根据表格要点简述雾霾情况，并倡导绿色生活，具体信息是以表格的形式给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性．象范文的句子：it's good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible．就使用了it做形式主语，还有状语从句的省略，还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来，如：firstly；what's more；last but not least等等．
亮点句型一：It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China，causing much inconvenience and even harm to our daily life and health．它持续了大约三周，影响了中国许多地区，造成很多不便，给我们的日常生活和健康甚至危害．本句是一个非谓语的句型，其中causing是现在分词在句中做结果状语．
亮点句型二：And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality．我相信绿色的生活方式会对空气质量产生很大的影响．这是一个宾语从句，a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality是believe的宾语，省略了引导词that．

解答 Greener Life，Cleaner Air
It is not easy to forget the heavy smog that occurred in January，2015．It lasted for about three weeks and affected many areas in China，causing much inconvenience and even harm to our daily life and health．（亮点句型一）【雾霾情况】
The incident warned us to take action to fight for clean air before it's too late．And I believe a green lifestyle can make a big difference to the air quality．（亮点句型二）Firstly，it's good to take buses or other means of public transportation rather than cars whenever possible．What's more，be aware to save water，electricity and paper．Moreover，recycle whatever we can．Last but not least，don't forget to influence those around you to follow!【绿色生活】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．