题目内容
【题目】假如你是你校学生会主席王伟,你校将于元旦前夕 举行“校园十大歌手”比赛,现由你写一封邀请信,请你校外教Steven 来当评委。主要要点如下:
1. 时间和地点:12月31日(星期三)晚8:00 --- 10:00,学校运动场。
2. 参加人员:来自初、高中的20名学生与2名教师。
3. 其它:请提前10分钟到场。
注意事项:1. 可适当增加细节使上下文连贯;
2. 词数100左右。开头已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:“校园十大歌手”比赛The Top 10 Singers Competition
Dear Steven,
I’m Wang Wei, Chairman of the Students’ Union. New Year’s Day is coming and …
We’re looking forward to your reply!
Yours Sincerely,
Wang Wei
【答案】
Dear Steven,
I’m Wang Wei, Chairman of the Students’ Union. New Year’s Day is coming and The Top 10 Singers Competition will be held in our school. I’m writing to inform you that we’d like to invite you as one of the judges.
The competition, which is one of the most important events of the year in our school, will be in the stadium on Wednesday evening, December 31. Twenty students from both junior and senior departments, as well as 2 teachers, will take part in it, and all the students will go to watch it and cheer for their competitors. Ten best singers will be chosen as the top 10 campus singers of the year.
The competition will start at 8pm and last for about 2 hours, so would you please come before 7:50pm?
We’re looking forward to your reply!
Yours Sincerely,
Wang Wei
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信,根据提示信息来写一封邀请函。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读题目,弄清楚邀请函主要包括的信息,不要遗漏要点;2、注意时态及语法,不要出现低级错误,注意自己的口吻要符合校学生会主席的身份;3、适当运用高级词汇及恰当的连接词,来为文章增色。
【亮点说明】本文口吻恰当,语气中体现出对教授的尊敬之情,很好的涵盖了题目中的要求,而且使用了多种句式和结构。熟练地运用了多种短语及单词,如cheer for their competitors为参赛者加油, looking forward to盼望。也运用了高级句式使得文章增色,如inform you that 是inform的从句形式,The competition, which is one of the most important events of the year in our school, 是非限制性定语从句,Ten best singers will be chosen as the top 10 campus singers of the year.是被动语态。结尾We’re looking forward to your reply!语气亲切诚恳,表达出了对外教的盼望之情。