假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear friends,

May I have you attention, please? I'm going to talk about something focusing in Protecting Wildlife. So far millions of species have died off or, have endangered mainly for two reasons. For one thing, man has been killing them for food or other commercial reasons. Take antelopes for example. Poachers hunt them for their fur, that can be made into luxurious shawls. For another, human civilization has been developing very fast that man has invaded and destroyed wild animals' natural habitats. Human activity have greatly threatened their existence. If all the wild animals disappear one day from the planet, humans would feel lonely. The world is beautiful for its diversity. Besides, some animals are extreme useful in the field of science, while others are especially adorable, unique, and keep us a good company. However, we should learn to share the earth with them. Thank you for your time.

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16．______ all the difficulties that his disease has caused him，Stephen Hawking has achieved more than many healthy people do．（　　）

13．-Don't worry，Mum．The doctor said it was only the flu．
-______！I'll tell dad there's nothing serious．（　　）

20．______a certain doubt among the parents as to the necessity of children's doing so much home-work．（　　）

9．It's 5：45am．Following Jane's way of studying chimps，we are all going to visit a family of chimps in the forest．Jane warns us that we'll be very tired and dirty by the afternoon and she's right．However，the evening makes it all （61）worthwhile（worth） to visit．Jane has studied chimps for many years and helped people understand how much their （62）behaviors（behave）are like humans．She spent years （63）observing（observe） and recording their daily activities．Since her childhood，she（64）had wanted （want）to work with animals in their own environment，（65）butit was not easy．She began her project（66）with the help of her mother．Her work changed the way people think about chimps．For years Jane has been outspoken about making people understand and respect the life of these animals．She has（67）argued（argue）that wild animals should not be used for （68）entertainment（entertain）or advertisements．She has made great（69）achievements（achieve） in everything she wanted to do，（70）whichinspires those who want to follow and cheer up．

15．请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入（box-office income）的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．

Saturday Afternoon．In a Shopping Center．
Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua．Which movie shall we see？
Su Hua：Whatever．We'er got so many choice，Kung Fu Yoga，
Journey to the West…Each sounds great!
Li Jiang：Yeah!And some movie stars are fantastic．
Su Hua：And the high-tech!…
Li Jiang：Perfect!Let's get ome food first．We only have 20
minutes left．
Su Hua：No hurry．The cinema is on the same floor．

One Day in 2016．At Home．
     Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film to night？
Mother：Why bother？We can stay at home and watch films online．It's convenient
              with our new and faster network
     Son：But it feels good in a cinema．
Mother：And the price..We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket．
      Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year．
Mother：But still we cannot get the money's worth．Some films are just boring…

【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点）；
3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由．
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
As is indicated in the graph，the box-office income of Chinese films increased constantly from 2012 to 2015，but its growth，for one reason or another，slowed down in 2016．
The increase in the box-office income can be attributed to a number of factors．The quality of life has improved and watching films is regarded as a good means of entertainment．Besides，filming technology has advanced and more quality films are on offer．Moreover，the internet plays animportant part．On the internet，people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well，which is both time-saving and economical．
However，the film market may witness a slowdown in the near future．Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the Internet and cellphones，and the ticket price is on the increase．
Therefore，the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers．．

Most people know that Marie Curie was the first woman to win the Nobel Prize, and the first person to win it twice. However, few people know that she was also the mother of a Nobel Prize winner.

Born in September, 1897, Irene Curie was the first of the Curies’ two daughters. Along with nine other children whose parents were also famous scholars, Irene studied in their own school, and her mother was one of the teachers. She finished her high school education at the College of Sevigne in Paris.

At the age of 17 Irene entered the University of Paris to prepare for a degree in mathematics and physics. When World War I began, Irene went to help her mother, who was using X-ray facilities(设备) to help save the lives of wounded soldiers. Irene continued the work by developing X-ray facilities in military hospitals in France and Belgium. Her services were recognized in the form of a Military’s Medal by the French government.

In 1918, Irene became her mother’s assistant at the Curie Institute. In December 1924, Frederic Joliot joined the Institute, and Irene taught him the techniques required for his work. They soon fell in love and were married in 1926. Their daughter Helene was born in 1927 and their son Pierre five years later.

Like her mother, Irene combined family and career. Like her mother, Irene was awarded a Nobel Prize, along with her husband, in 1935. Unfortunately, also like her mother, she developed leukemia because of her work with radioactivity(辐射能). Irene Joliot-Curie died from leukemia on March 17, 1956.

1.When did Irene Curie go to the University of Paris?

A. In 1897 B. In 1914

C. In 1918 D. In 1924

2.Who was not a winner of Nobel Prize?

A. Marie Curie B. Irene Curie

C. Frederic Joliet D. Helene Joliot

3.Which of the following about Irene Curie is not true?

A. She was the elder child of Marie Curie’s

B. She got a Military’s Medal because of her services to save the wounded

C. She met her husband at the Curie institute in 1924

D. She developed leukemia but was cured

4.Which part in the newspaper may the passage come from?

A. People B. Society

C. Culture D. History

15．Evaluating（评价） sources of health information．
    Making good choices about your own health requires reasonable evaluation．A key first step in bettering your evaluation ability is to look carefully at your sources of healthy information．Reasonable evaluation includes knowing where and how to fins relevant information，how to separate fact from opinions，how to recognize poor reasoning，and how to analyze information and the reliability of sources．（36）GGo to the original source．Media reports often simplify the results of medical research．Find out for yourself what a study really reported，and determine whether it was based on good science．Think about the type of study．（37）DWatch for misleading language．Some studies will find that a behaviour"contributes to"or is"associated with"an outcome； this does not mean that a certain course must lead to a certain result．（38）FCarefully read or listen to information in order to fully understand it．
    Use your common sense．If a report seems too good to be true，probably it is．Be especially careful of information contained in advertisements．（39）BEvaluate"scientific"statements caref ully，and be aware of quackery（江湖骗术）．
    （40）AFriends and family members can be a great source of ideas and inspiration，but each of us needs to find a healthy lifestyle that works for us．
   Developing the ability to evaluate reasonably and independently about the health problems will serve you well throughout your life．

A．Make choices that are right for you．
B．The goal of an ad is to sell you something．
C．Be sure to work through the critical questions．
D．And examine the findings of the original research．
E．Distinguish between re search reports and public health advice．
F．Be aware that information may als o be incorrectly explained by an author's point of view．
G．The following suggestions can help you sort through the health information you receive from common sources．

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