Question

7．假设你是Sunny，你的好友Sally是个性格外向、活泼开朗、不拘小节的女孩子，喜欢喝男孩子一起玩．而她的同桌却和她的性格相反，常常因为一些小事和她生气．她不知道该怎么办，因此写信向你求助．请你给她写封回信．
注意：（1）回信中至少提出三条建议；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）词数120左右．
Dear Sally，
It's very good that you want to make friends with the girl．In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you．Just share happiness and sadness with her．And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）
Good luck to you．
Yours，
Sunny．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息给你的好友Sally写封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：：（1）回信中至少提出三条建议；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）词数120左右．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make friends with与…交朋友；In my opinion以我的观点来看；heart-to-heart 心贴心的；Besides另外； in time 及时；
In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）
And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）
And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sally，
      It's very good that you want to make friends with the girl．In my opinion，you'd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with her，because understanding each other is very important for you two．（高分句型一）And I also think it's better for you to ask her to join you and your classmates in all kinds of activities，such as birthday parties，going out for a walk，discussing some fashionable topics．（高分句型二）Besides，helping each other is also very important for both of you．Just share happiness and sadness with her．And I believe she will understand you in time and it is certain that you will be good friends in future．（高分句型三）
      Good luck to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Sunny

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．