题目内容
16.假设你是李华,英语课上,外教Mr.Smith让你课后写一篇介绍自己的邮件,请你根据以下要点完成作业.邮件的内容包括:(1)个人基本情况;2.你的强项与弱项;3.新学年的期待.注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;(2)可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.Dear Smith,
I'm glad to write you to introduce myself____________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息给外教Mr.Smith让写一篇介绍自己的邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:(1)个人基本情况;(2)你的强项与弱项;(3)新学年的期待. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:far from 远离;be good at擅长; make full use of充分利用; I'm a boy,16,living in the same city not far from our school.(高分句型一)句中使用了living in the same city not far from our school现在分词作定语
I would greatly appreciate it if you create more circumstances for us students to train our spoken English and hearing.(高分句型二) 句中使用了it作形式宾语,if从句是真正的宾语从句
解答 Dear Smith,
I'm glad to write you to introduce myself.It is my first time to hear an American speak English.I've learned a lot in your first class. I'm a boy,16,living in the same city not far from our school.(高分句型一) I like English very much,even getting a good mark in the entrance exam.I'm good at reading,writing,and grammar but weak in speaking and listening,as I had fewer chances to practice.
In the new term,I'll make full use of my strengths and over my shortcomings.I would greatly appreciate it if you create more circumstances for us students to train our spoken English and hearing.(高分句型二) I'm sure that my English will be highly improved with your help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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