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18.假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography ciub)将举办国际中学生摄影展,请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品,信的内容包括:1、主题:环境保护;2、展览时间;3、投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.(介绍主题)It will start from June15th and last three weeks.(高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展.请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,注意要适当拓展,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.
该句使用了who引导定语从句,修饰先行词students;
(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.
该句the last time相当于一个连词短语,连接两个并列句;

解答 Dear Peter,
      Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School students Photography Show.The theme of the show is environmental protection.(介绍主题)It will start from June15th and last three weeks.(高分句型一)Any students who is interested in are welcome to participate.I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection.(高分句型二)I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.If you want to join,you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
       Hope to hear from you soon.
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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