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9．假设你是李华，上星期发现学校的电脑室存在一些问题．请根据表格中记录的要点，给校长写一封建议信．
注意：1．词数100左右．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
2．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校的名称．
Date of visiting the computer room：on Saturday，June 18
Problems with the computers：
●old and slow，sometimes do not work
●not connected to the Internet
●Keyboards have letters missing，mouses and monitors are not functioning well
Other problems：The lighting in the computer room is poor and the air is not fresh．Suggestions：update the computers and other equipment； improve the environment
Dear Sir/Madame，
I'm writing to you to express my experience in the computer room．
                                                                 
Looking forward to that day!
Yours
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，上星期发现学校的电脑室存在一些问题．请根据表格中记录的要点，给校长写一封建议信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：do my homework做作业；What's more而且；Still仍旧；as well as也，还；Look forward to盼望；

解答 Dear Sir/Madame，
       I'm writing to you to express my experience in the computer room．I visited the computer room on Saturday，June 18 to do my homework，but I experienced some problems．（高分句型一） The computers are old and slow，and some even don't work．A lot of keyboards have letters missing，and some mouses and monitors are not functioning well!What's more，the computers can not always be connected to the Internet．（高分句型二） Still，I found the lighting in the computer room is poor and the air is not fresh．
       It is important to learn how to use the information technology，so our school really needs to update the computers and other equipment as well as improve the environment．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to that day!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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1．词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
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The Student Union                                                ．
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Yours，
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