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13．春天到来了，越来越多的人爱上爬山这项运动．人们走近大自然，在锻炼身体的同时享受自然美景．然而，有些人缺乏环保意识，垃圾随处乱扔，污染了绿色的山岭．更糟糕的是，有些人甚至在山林里吸烟，给森林安全造成威胁．
假如你是李华，请结合以上信息给21世纪报编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这件事情的看法．
注意：1．词数为100左右；提示词 2．爬山：mountain-climbing 缺乏：be lack of  意识：awareness．
Dear editor，
Spring is drawing near．An increasing number of people develop an interest in mountain-climbing．They can get close to nature and enjoy its beauty while doing exercise and taking in fresh air，which is surely beneficial to their health．（高分句型一）
However，because of lack of the environmental awareness，some people throw waste wherever they go，thus making green hills polluted．（高分句型二）To make matters worse，some even smoke in the woods，which is a great threat to the forest safety．（高分句型三）
As far as I'm concerned，it is good to take exercise outdoors．But we'd better strengthen our awareness of environmental protection．Only in this way will we be able to enjoy the beauty of nature and green our future．（高分句型四）
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 春天到来了，越来越多的人爱上爬山这项运动．人们走近大自然，在锻炼身体的同时享受自然美景．然而，有些人缺乏环保意识，垃圾随处乱扔，污染了绿色的山岭．更糟糕的是，有些人甚至在山林里吸烟，给森林安全造成威胁．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：请结合以上信息给21世纪报编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这件事情的看法   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：get close to靠近，接近；do exercise做运动；However然而；because of 由于；To make matters worse更糟的是； As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看； in this way以这种方式；
They can get close to nature and enjoy its beauty while doing exercise and taking in fresh air，which is surely beneficial to their health．（高分句型一）
However，because of lack of the environmental awareness，some people throw waste wherever they go，thus making green hills polluted．（高分句型二）
To make matters worse，some even smoke in the woods，which is a great threat to the forest safety．（高分句型三）
Only in this way will we be able to enjoy the beauty of nature and green our future．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear editor，
     Spring is drawing near．An increasing number of people develop an interest in mountain-climbing．They can get close to nature and enjoy its beauty while doing exercise and taking in fresh air，which is surely beneficial to their health．（高分句型一）
     However，because of lack of the environmental awareness，some people throw waste wherever they go，thus making green hills polluted．（高分句型二）To make matters worse，some even smoke in the woods，which is a great threat to the forest safety．（高分句型三）
     As far as I'm concerned，it is good to take exercise outdoors．But we'd better strengthen our awareness of environmental protection．Only in this way will we be able to enjoy the beauty of nature and green our future．（高分句型四）
                                                                                                                                                                                         Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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