Question

20．随着网络的普及，越来越多的学生依赖网络做作业．请你依据以下内容写一篇英语短文．
1．借助网络做作业的优点：省时；查询答案方便等；
2．依赖网络做作业的缺点：导致懒惰；养成不良学习习惯等；
3．你的建议．
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100 左右；
3．开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Nowadays，more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet．
                        

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） Firstly，with the click of a mouse，the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly，which saves them time on schoolwork．
句子里with表示伴随状语；which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰现行词这件事情；
（高分句型二） it's convenient to search the Internet for answers．
该句型使用了It is convenient to do…做某事很方便；
（高分句型三）With no effort，some students copy online answers，resulting laziness and bad studying habits．
resulting in是现在分词做状语，表示结果；
高级词汇：advantage优点；convenient 方便的；disadvantage缺点；in a reasonable way合理的方式；
Generally speaking一般说来；However转折；Worse still更糟糕的； In my opinion在我看来；

解答 Nowadays，more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of the Internet．（优点）Generally speaking，its advantages can be seen as follows．（高分句型一） Firstly，with the click of a mouse，the students can get what they want from the Internet quickly，which saves them time on schoolwork．Secondly，if they find something difficult，（高分句型二） it's convenient to search the Internet for answers．
   （缺点）However，depending too much on the Internet may bring some disadvantages．（高分句型三）With no effort，some students copy online answers，resulting laziness and bad studying habits．Worse still，it may kill their creative thinking．
    In my opinion，（我的观点）we may enjoy the convenience of the Internet，but turn to it for help when really necessary．In brief，we should use it in a reasonable way．

点评 提纲作文实际上是对考生的思路以及文章的写作范围给出了明确的限定，因此考生在写作时，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥；要根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；注意句子的时态，词语的丰富和句型的多样性．