题目内容
8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I like doing physical exercise.Our teachers say physical movements not only improve one's healthy,but also does good to the efficiency of learning.On the morning,I spend at least half an hour run on the playground,where there are hundreds of students running around.In the afternoon,I played basketball matches with his classmates against other classes.Sometimes I join my friends the football matches.Before the game is over,I am wet.Although I am tired,but I feel very happy.When worked with my classmates,I have learned the importance of cooperation.What's more,I feel more energetic after movements and learn things fast with a cleaner head.
分析 作者在本文告诉我们体育运动有很多益处,不仅有益于健康,还能提高学习效率,因此作者平时参加各种体育锻炼.
解答 I like doing physical exercise.Our teachers say physical movements not only improve one's healthy,but also does good to the efficiency of learning.On the morning,I spend at least half an hour run on the playground,where there are hundreds of students running around.In the afternoon,I played basketball matches with his classmates against other classes.Sometimes I join my friends∧the football matches.Before the game is over,I am wet.Although I am tired,but I feel very happy.When worked with my classmates,I have learned the importance of cooperation.What's more,I feel more energetic after movements and learn things fast with a cleaner head
详解:
1.healthy改为health;考查名词,名词所有格 one's 要跟名词形式health,healthy是形容词"健康的".
2.does改为do;考查主谓一致.not only…but also连接并列谓语时,谓语动词的形式应该保持一致.
3.On改为In;考查介词.在上午用in the morning.
4.run改为running;考查非谓语动词,spend time (in) doing是固定搭配,意为"花费时间做某事".
5.played改为play; 考查动词时态.文章叙述的是经常性的情况,故应用一般现在时.
6.his改为my;考查形容词性物主代词,分析句意可知此处的物主代词应与主语I保持一致,故用my.
7.the 前加in;考查固定搭配,join sb in sth 是固定搭配,意为"加入某人一起做某事".
8.去掉but;考查让步状语从句.Although 引导让步状语从句时,可以与yet,still连用,但不能与but连用,故把but去掉.
9.worked改为working;考查省略句,when+doing是一种省略主语和谓语的表达方法,完整形式为when I am working with my classmates…
10.fast改为faster;考查形容词的比较级.根据语境判断,体育活动之后学习效率更高,含比较意义,故用比较级形式faster.
点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文,了解短文基本大意,确定文章的基本时态,再运用语法,词汇,习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子,找出文中的错误加以修改
One day,Marissa noticed a spider(蜘蛛) web,shining in the sunlight.A spider was spinning webs on it.The spider wasn't trying to be something else,like a butterfly or a bee,Marissa thought.It was happy to be exactly what it was and to do what it was good at.
What came naturally to Marissa was(41)B.She could paint or draw all day long and never get bored.However,a few weeks ago Marissa signed(42)Afor high jump.Because her mother had been a high jump star in school,she thought it would make her mother happy.But now she(43)Athat how ever hard she worked,she would never be a high jump star like her mother.One night,halfway through her homework,Marissa fell (44)D.When she woke up,the clock(45)B1:00 A.M.Marissa got into a panic.There was still so much(46)A to do,but she really needed her rest for track(田径) practice.Marissa had always been a good student,but now track was risking her(47)B.
Then a dark thought(48)DMarissa's mind.If she(49)Dsome of her classes,she would be off the track team.That was one way to solve her problem.After a week of(50)Dher homework,letters had been mailed out to parents listing grades,and Marissa knew the letters would show that her grades had(51)Ca lot.She walked home with slow heavy steps,knowing her(52)Bplan had(53)D.Just as Marissa had expected,her mother was waiting with the letter in her hand."What's happening to your grades?And more importantly,what's happening to you?"she asked.With tears in her eyes,Marissa admitted her(54)C."I only joined the track team to make you proud of me.I hated it,(55)AI didn't want to disappoint you.I thought if I were failing in my class es,Coach would kick me off the team.What a(56)AI've made of everything."
Marissa watched her mother's face turn from anger to(57)C."Marissa,I was always proud of you.You didn't need to do the high jump to make me happy.Now you have a lot of hard work in front of you because you made a bad(58)B."
Marissa thought again about the spider.She realized she had lost sight of her(59)Cand twisted her web.Now she had to go back and(60)Athat web.
41.A.music | B.art | C.sport | D.dance |
42.A.up | B.off | C.down | D.over |
43.A.realized | B.insisted | C.wondered | D.remembered |
44.A.ill | B.silent | C.apart | D.asleep |
45.A.says | B.read | C.wrote | D.truck |
46.A.homework | B.practice | C.housework | D.research |
47.A.life | B.grades | C.health | D.images |
48.A.occurred | B.took | C.appeared | D.crossed |
49.A.attended | B.gave | C.took | D.failed |
50.A.preparing | B.copying | C.ignoring | D.completing |
51.A.risen | B.improved | C.dropped | D.meant |
52.A.strange | B.ugly | C.simple | D.serious |
53.A.carried | B.made | C.stopped | D.worked |
54.A.feeling | B.excuse | C.secret | D.weakness |
55.A.but | B.so | C.and | D.or |
56.A.mess | B.scare | C.surprise | D.joke |
57.A.delight | B.embarrassment | C.concern | D.disappointment |
58.A.jump | B.choice | C.speech | D.stop |
59.A.success | B.example | C.purpose | D.balance |
60.A.rebuild | B.review | C.find | D.break |
请根据下表所提供的内容写一篇短文,简要介绍加拿大的情况.
地理位置 | 位于北美,南与美国接壤,其它三面为海洋所环绕. 首都是渥太华(Ottawa). |
气候 | 国土辽阔,各地气候差异较大但总体上阳光充沛. |
官方语言 | 英语和法语. |
名城 | 温哥华(Vancouver)是加拿大最美丽的城市和最受欢迎的居住城市之一. |
人民性格 | 勤奋、友好,乐于帮助外地人. |