Question

16．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友 Tom 对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣．他想请你介绍你最 喜欢的节日端午节，喜欢的原因，及庆祝方式．请你为他回复邮件．
注意：1．词数 100 左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数． 参考词汇：端午节 the Dragon Boat Festival
Dear Tom，
I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals．Here I feel greatly privileged to introduce to you my favorite one，the Dragon Boat Festival．
Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese Lunar Year．The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高级句型一） Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高级句型二）
Nowadays，people in China observe this traditional holiday by holding dragon boat races and eating zong zi which is made of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves．
In my opinion，as a traditional Chinese festival，Dragon Boat Festival keeps us reminded of the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors．By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高级句型三）
Bestwishes!
Best wishes!
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．写作中应该尽量使用高级词汇及高级句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理．
高级词汇及句型
   a respected patriotic poet；devotion to；Hopeless and angry；the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors
    The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高级句型一）
    Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高级句型二）
     By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高级句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese festivals．Here I feel greatly privileged to introduce to you my favorite one，the Dragon Boat Festival．
       Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese Lunar Year．The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高级句型一） Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高级句型二）
       Nowadays，people in China observe this traditional holiday by holding dragon boat races and eating zong zi which is made of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves．
       In my opinion，as a traditional Chinese festival，Dragon Boat Festival keeps us reminded of the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors．By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高级句型三）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．