题目内容
【题目】假如你是李越,即将进入大学学习。请你用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文,谈谈你进入大学后的打算。短文应包含以下要点:
1. 如何尽快适应环境;
2. 如何发展各种能力。
注意:短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
With my college life waiting for me,
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【答案】
With my college life waiting for me, a good plan is necessary for helping me rise to challenges.
Adjusting myself quickly to the completely different circumstance is the first thing I will deal with. I will try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible. Additionally, while keeping pace with the new study rhythm, I will make some friends and get along well with my teachers so that I can feel at ease in college.
What I value next is to get various abilities developed. Besides being independent in both study and life, I will enter for meaningful activities to get more social practice and develop my strong points, which can give me advantages over others.
I’m sure another success is waving at me!
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如while keeping pace with the new study rhythm, I will make some friends and get along well with my teachers so that I can feel at ease in college. 中,while引导时间状语从句,so that引导目的状语;主语从句:What I value next is to get various abilities developed;定语从句I will enter for meaningful activities to get more social practice and develop my strong points, which can give me advantages over others等。另外一些短语的使用,让文章更有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。例如:be necessary for sb to do; deal with; get used to; as soon as possible; keep pace with; make some friends; get along well with; at ease; besides等。