Question

【题目】食物浪费是全世界一个严肃的问题。为此，开始于去年1月的光盘行动在网络上呼吁人们减少食物浪费。下面请根据所提供的材料，以 “How to reduce food waste”为题，写一篇80词的短文，并提出你的看法或者建议。

1．在餐馆不要点太多的食物；

2．如果你不能吃完所点的食物，那就把剩余的带回家；

3．对食物不要太挑剔，一些食物也许尝起来不怎么，但你的身体需要；

4．留意家里的食物，不要买的太多，特别是蔬菜和水果；

注意：1．文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节，保持连贯；

3．文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。

参考词汇：reduce减少； rest 剩余的； picky 挑剔的; keep an eye on 注意、留意。

How to reduce food waste

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January last year. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to reduce food waste

Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.

Do not order too much in a restaurant. Only order as much as you want to eat. If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home. Don’t be too picky about food. Some food may not taste great, but your body needs it. Keep an eye on what food you have at home. Don’t buy too much, especially vegetables and fruit. To reduce food waste is a big task, and it needs time. It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇议论文，针对开始于去年1月的光盘行动提出自己的看法和建议。写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2.题目已经给出相关要点和词汇，要在题目要求的范围内进行合理分析、构思和想象。3.遵循一定的逻辑关系，条理清楚，结构清晰，上下文连贯，语言得体。4.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 5.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Do not order too much in a restaurant. Only order as much as you want to eat.多用短句，使文章条理清晰，简洁明了；It’s important that everyone must save food and reduce food waste from now on.强调句型，突出重点，一目了然；If you cannot eat all the food you ordered, take the rest of it home.多用祈使句型，语气委婉；Do not order too much in a restaurant.；Don’t be too picky about food.；Don’t buy too much, especially vegetables and fruit.三个do not 句子分开层次，使文章层次清楚。