题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华,最近在浏览新西兰的中学网站时,看到一位名叫Tom的留言, 他计划在暑假期间到中国的哈尔滨旅游,希望能有一名中国的中学生作他的导游。你对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封e-mail,介绍相关情况。
主要内容: 1.希望做他的导游;
2. 打算如何给他做导游;
3. 期盼他的回复。
注意:
1. 字数100字左右。2. 信的开头结尾已经写好,不计入总字数。
Dear Tom,
Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it. I get to know your wishes that you intend to travel in Harbin during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide.
Learning this news, I am really willing to travel with you and introduce Harbin to you. I know as a brilliant guide I am supposed to make your journey interesting and meaningful. For one thing, I will keep you company to visit numerous great places of interest and enjoy the wonderful sightseeing. For another thing, I am going to tell you something of Harbin’ s history.
I am looking forward to the reply from you. With all my wishes you could give me this honor.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇书信体写作,根据题目提示信息和要求来介绍相关情况。写作时注意以下几点:1.仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2.提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文条理清楚,语气诚恳,格式正确,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如,使用了For one thing, For another thing, 使文章逻辑清楚,语言连贯;Learning this news, I am really willing to travel with you and introduce Harbin to you.使用v-ing短语做伴随状语;I am really willing to ...I am supposed to....语气诚恳委婉,十分具有诚意;while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.while引导的时间状语从句,使句子更具有逻辑性,通顺明了。