Question

【题目】假定你是李华，受疫情（pandemic）影响，学校美术俱乐部的活动不能在原教室进行，改为上一节网课。请写信通知你的英国同学Peter。内容包括：

1.上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00；

2.登录软件：DingTalk App；

3.内容：卡通画；

4.课前准备。

注意：1.词数80左右：

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How are you these days? I am writing to tell you something about our art class.

Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom as usual. Instead, we will have an online class by DingTalk App. The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st . It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance and log on at least five minutes before the class.

Hope everything goes well!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：

审题：信件 通知你的英国同学Peter上网课

人称：第二、三人称

时态：一般现在时、一般将来时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明写信目的，第二部分说明网课具体安排，

第三部分祝愿一切安好。

要点：

1. 说明写信目的：告知美术俱乐部上课事项

2．说明网课具体安排

①上课时间：7月21日上午9:00-10:00

②登录软件：DingTalk App

③内容：绘画卡通画

④课前准备：提前下载DingTalk App，上课前5分钟必须登陆

3．祝愿一切安好

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

tell sb. about; organize activities; as usual; have an online class; last ; cartoon figures; make preparations for ;be required to do…; in advance ; log on

第三步：连词成句

(1)I am writing to tell you something about our art class.

(2) Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

(3) We will have an online class by DingTalk App.

(4)The class will begin at 9:00 am on July 21st .

(5) It will last about one hour.

(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

(7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.

(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance,

(9) You log on at least five minutes before the class.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用多种句式表达“由于/因为……”

(2)Because of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→Due to the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→As a result of the pandemic, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

→ The pandemic has broken out. As a result, we can’t organize any activities in our former classroom.

将第二个句子改写成定语从句，连接下面两个句子

(5) It will last about one hour.

(6) During this period, we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

→It will last about one hour, during which we will learn to draw our favorite cartoon figures.

将第一个句子作目的状语，连接下面两个句子

(7) You have to make good preparations for the online class.

(8) You are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance,

→To make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.

→In order to make good preparations for the online class, you are required to download DingTalk App on your cellphone in advance.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。