题目内容
【题目】假如你是一家报社的编辑布莱克先生,收到了高一学生李华的来信。近来他在英语的阅读上有些困难,做阅读理解题时常出错,因此他很着急,不知该如何做,请求你给想想办法,尽快调整好,适应高一的学习生活。
请你根据以上的情况写一篇100词左右的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m honored to be believed.
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As far as I’m concerned, if you do like this, I believe you will make great progress.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Mr Black
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m honored to be believed. I know you have trouble in doing exercises in reading and you are worried. Here is some advice, which may be of help to you.
Firstly, you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty. You should have confidence, which is the key to success. Secondly, you’d better not be afraid of making mistakes. Thirdly, you should go on reading the passage -- one passage a day. After a short period of time, you will find you make fewer mistakes. Insisting on reading to the end is to victory. Lastly, you should make a proper plan for your subjects, which will be helpful for your future study.
As far as I’m concerned, if you do like this, I believe you will make great progress.
Best wishes!
Yours.
Mr Black
【解析】
这是一封建议信格式的应用文。根据信中要求回复给出学习上的建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.了解到阅读学习上有困难,你很着急。提出给建议,也许可以帮到你。I know you have trouble in doing exercises in reading and you are worried. Here is some advice, which may be of help to you.
2.建议如下:1)你应该知道每个人都会遇到你相同的困难。Firstly, you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty.你应该有信心,这是成功的关键。You should have confidence, which is the key to success.
2)你应该不要害怕犯错误。Secondly, you’d better not be afraid of making mistakes.
3)你应该继续进行阅读训练,每天一篇文章,Thirdly, you should go on reading the passage -- one passage a day.短时间后你会发现你犯的错误减少了。After a short period of time, you will find you make fewer mistakes.坚持阅读直到你成功为止。Insisting on reading to the end is to victory.
4)你应该制定合适的阅读计划,这样会有助于你将来的学习。Lastly, you should make a proper plan for your subjects, which will be helpful for your future study.
3.表示愿望:据我所知,如果你照我说的去做,我相信你会取得巨大的进步。As far as I’m concerned, if you do like this, I believe you will make great progress.
4.表示祝愿:Best wishes!
第二步:列提纲(重点词组及句型)
have trouble in doing exercises; in reading; and you are worried; be of help to you;meet with the same difficulty;have confidence;the key to success;you’d better not;be afraid of;making mistakes;go on reading the passage;after a short period of time;make fewer mistakes;insisting on reading to the end;is to victory;make a proper plan;for your subjects,;be helpful for;your future study.
第三步:连词成句
I know you have trouble in doing exercises in reading and you are worried.
Here is some advice, which may be of help to you.
Firstly, you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty.
You should have confidence, which is the key to success.
Secondly, you’d better not be afraid of making mistakes.
Thirdly, you should go on reading the passage -- one passage a day
After a short period of time, you will find you make fewer mistakes.
Insisting on reading to the end is to victory.
Lastly, you should make a proper plan for your subjects, which will be helpful for your future study.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/ doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, not because…but because…
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改