题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,刚刚从内黄一中毕业并进入北京大学,最近你应学校的邀请给高一的学妹学弟写一封公开信,就“ How to live a healthy life in High school” 这个话题提出了如下建议:
1. 学习和放松兼顾,求得两者的平衡
2. 保持均衡饮食
3. 定期进行锻炼
4. 遇到问题时,多和朋友、老师、家长交流
注意:1.词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 文章开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
可能用到的词汇: 1. nutritious 有营养的 2. function vi. 发挥功能
3. regularly 定期地, 有规律地 4. communicate vi 交流 5. anxiety 焦虑
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua, a graduate from our school. Now I am studying in Beijing University. __________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua, a graduate from our school. Now I am studying in Beijing University. To help you to live more easily through your high school years, I am very glad to give my personal advice on how to live a healthy life in high school.
Firstly, strike a balance between your studies and relaxation. In high school, with too much to learn and too much homework to do, you suffer from more stress. To keep fit, you must spare some time to relax yourself , or your health will get worse.
Secondly, keep a balanced diet. Only by having nutritious food can your body function well.
Thirdly, do sports regularly. Doing sports can build up our body and help reduce stress.
Last but not least, communicate more with your parents, friends and teachers. High school can be filled with anxiety and worry. Whenever in trouble , turn to your parents, friends or teachers , they can share your happiness and sorrow and help you settle your problems.
In a word, only by living a healthy life can we go through high school successfully.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:作文的写作要点已经给出,需要考生根据提示进行写作,作文必须涵盖所有要点,还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右,标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性,不能出现与本人有关的信息。考生写作之前必须认真审题,注意描述具体事例时要用过去时态,人称用第一人称,内容紧紧围绕所给的主题,最后要有总结,形成首尾呼应。
【亮点说明】本文用了多种复合句,用了 I am very glad to give my personal advice on how to live a healthy life in high school. 是一个方式状语从句,还用了Firstly, Secondly,Thirdly,Last but not least,使文章层次分明,Only by having nutritious food can your body function well是一个倒装句,communicate more with your parents是一个祈使句。
考点:考查书信类作文