题目内容
【题目】某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”,希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物,为之代言(speak for),唤起人们的动物保护意识。假设你是南海育才中学的学生李华,有意参与该活动。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容包括:
1. 你个人的基本情况(姓名、性别、年龄);
2. 申请陈述内容;
3. 希望获准。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua, an 18-year-old student at Nanhai Yucai High School. Knowing that you want some students to speak for the animals they like, I would like to participate in the activity and speak for pandas.
I have been loving animals since I was a child and I care about animals very much. Not only are pandas lovely animals which are considered as the treasure of our country, but also they are rare animals in danger of dying out. I would like to speak for pandas so that I can raise people’s awareness of animal protection.
I hope I can do something for pandas. I’m looking forward to your reply
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作,要求写一封申请书。
第1步:根据提示可知,某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”,希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物,为之代言(speak for),唤起人们的动物保护意识。假设你是南海育才中学的学生李华,有意参与该活动。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容包括:1. 你个人的基本情况(姓名、性别、年龄);2. 申请陈述内容;3. 希望获准。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):speak for (代表);would like(想要);participate in(参加);care about (关心);in danger of (处于……危险之中)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。