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4．为了培养和增强学生的文物保护意识，学校特请来省文物专家为同学们作有关文物的报告．请将此事写一个书面通知，告诉全校同学，内容要点如下：
报告主题：如何辨认和保护文物．
报告人：沈立教授
报告时间：星期五下午2：00-4：00
报告地点：学校报告厅
注意事项：带笔记本，以班为单位排队入场、就座
组织者：校学生会
通知时间：12月19日
注意：①词数100左右
②生词：辨认   identify    学生会   The Student Union
NoticeDecember 19
To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）In this lecture，Mr．Shen Li will talk about something about how to identify cultural relics and how to protect them．This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）The lecture will start at 2：00 p．m．and ends at 4：00 p．m．Bring your notebooks with you．Be sure．
The Student Union．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息为了培养和增强学生的文物保护意识，学校特请来省文物专家为同学们作有关文物的报告．请将此事写一个书面通知，告诉全校同学，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：报告主题：如何辨认和保护文物．报告人：沈立教授   报告时间：星期五下午2：00-4：00    报告地点：学校报告厅     注意事项：带笔记本，以班为单位排队入场、就座        组织者：校学生会          通知时间：12月19日  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：cultural relics文化遗产；attend the lecture听演讲；line up排队；take your seats就坐；
 To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）
This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）
You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）

解答 Notice
                                                                                                                              December 19
        To offer the students'some knowledge on cultural relics，a lecture will be given by Prof．Shen Li at 2：00 this Friday afternoon．（高分句型一）In this lecture，Mr．Shen Li will talk about something about how to identify cultural relics and how to protect them．This is a good chance for students to learn something about that，so all the students are required to attend the lecture．（高分句型二）You are expected to line up first at 1：30 p．m．and then enter the hall，where the lecture will be held，and take your seats by the unit of class．（高分句型三）The lecture will start at 2：00 p．m．and ends at 4：00 p．m．Bring your notebooks with you．Be sure．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            The Student Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．