Question

12．假如你是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现学校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象．请用英语给图书馆馆长Mr．David写一封信，要点如下：
1．说明写信目的；
2．提出合理建议．
注意：1．短文词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总次数．
Dear Mr．David，
I am Li Hua，a student from Class Five，Senior Three．Recently，I went to the library．I found some bad behaviors．Therefore，I am writing with the purpose of giving some suggestions，which，I hope，would be of some help to create a better environment for readers．（高分句型一）
I noticed some students talking and laughing，whose behaviors badly disturbed other students'study．（高分句型二）What's worse，several students were even eating snacks and throwing rubbish everywhere．Library is a public place where we gain knowledge and relaxation．So rules should be made to restrict people's behavior．Everyone should keep quiet in the reading room．In addition，eating and littering should be forbidden there．Only in this way can we create a clean and tidy place to make students feel comfortable staying there．（高分句型三）
Thank you for your consideration．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现学校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象．请用英语给图书馆馆长Mr．David写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：说明写信目的；提出合理建议． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Therefore因此；with the purpose of 有什么样的目的；be of some help 有些帮助；What's worse而且；In addition另外；in this way以这种方式；
Therefore，I am writing with the purpose of giving some suggestions，which，I hope，would be of some help to create a better environment for readers．（高分句型一）
  I noticed some students talking and laughing，whose behaviors badly disturbed other students'study．（高分句型二）
Only in this way can we create a clean and tidy place to make students feel comfortable staying there．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．David，
       I am Li Hua，a student from Senior Three．Recently，I went to the library．I found some bad behaviors．Therefore，I am writing with the purpose of giving some suggestions，which，I hope，would be of some help to create a better environment for readers．（高分句型一）
       I noticed some students talking and laughing，whose behaviors badly disturbed other students'study．（高分句型二）What's worse，several students were even eating snacks and throwing rubbish everywhere．Library is a public place where we gain knowledge and relaxation．So rules should be made to restrict people's behavior．Everyone should keep quiet in the reading room．In addition，eating and littering should be forbidden there．Only in this way can we create a clean and tidy place to make students feel comfortable staying there．（高分句型三）
        Thank you for your consideration．
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．